Addiction

Zen · 02-18-2013, 12:22 PM

Honestly I thought this was a dope drop fig. When I read your verse I saw that we kinda have a similar style of writing but am I the only one seeing that? Idk lol. But I loved the content of this shit almost seemed introspective to me and made it feel real. Also I think it was an easy read with a nice flow and I have no problem with the vocab because to me it felt like alliteration being used throughout. Keep postin man

02-18-2013, 12:22 PM	#8
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Honestly I thought this was a dope drop fig. When I read your verse I saw that we kinda have a similar style of writing but am I the only one seeing that? Idk lol. But I loved the content of this shit almost seemed introspective to me and made it feel real. Also I think it was an easy read with a nice flow and I have no problem with the vocab because to me it felt like alliteration being used throughout. Keep postin man