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10-21-2013, 12:26 PM
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liked it cuz it was raw with honesty. almost like you had to step back and examine yourself. that last line is killer, though i enjoyed every line. definitely can relate to that self-destructive mindstate. even as you shift away from yourself by blaming your ex, you transition it back onto you with another confession of reflection.
good read, keep jottin
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