Week 4 - Clutter Buck (1-0) vs. Adonis (1-1) - ADONIS WINS 8-6

Angkor · 10-19-2013, 06:55 AM

hmm...ok...i'm gonna have to go against the majority here.

Adonis - Abortion narrative isn't anything new but your character development gave it enough life to stand on its own. Someone mentioned earlier that the rhyming was forced and i have to agree. It was pretty awkward in places. I dug how you were able to craft a story out of the topic given.

Clutter Buck - haha a verse about "writing" is about as common as a story about abortion...maybe even more so. But i have to give a nod to the technical aspect. This was some seriously dope writing. Definitely shades of the old Baron Mynd. Wording were crisp and rhymes were fresh. i really enjoyed it.

Vote - Clutter Buck. This is one of those classic battle between story and topical. So in the end, like most cases, its a matter of preference. While Adonis had some excellent characterization, bringing to life a very tired narrative concept, it was littered with weird wordings. CB, on the other hand chose an even more tired topic but was able to salvage with some awesome rhyming. cool battle.

10-19-2013, 06:55 AM	#11
Angkor Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 148 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 38	hmm...ok...i'm gonna have to go against the majority here. Adonis - Abortion narrative isn't anything new but your character development gave it enough life to stand on its own. Someone mentioned earlier that the rhyming was forced and i have to agree. It was pretty awkward in places. I dug how you were able to craft a story out of the topic given. Clutter Buck - haha a verse about "writing" is about as common as a story about abortion...maybe even more so. But i have to give a nod to the technical aspect. This was some seriously dope writing. Definitely shades of the old Baron Mynd. Wording were crisp and rhymes were fresh. i really enjoyed it. Vote - Clutter Buck. This is one of those classic battle between story and topical. So in the end, like most cases, its a matter of preference. While Adonis had some excellent characterization, bringing to life a very tired narrative concept, it was littered with weird wordings. CB, on the other hand chose an even more tired topic but was able to salvage with some awesome rhyming. cool battle.