WK1: Genocide (0-0) VS. Orc (0-0) [GENOCIDE WINS, 10-2.]

Atheist · 02-17-2013, 11:44 AM

Genocide - What I loved the most about your verse
was the imagery, painted some great pictures in my mind
The whole verse came together well & it made for a very
entertaining read, nice job. Couple of lines I enjoyed.

Only science exists, cause everything is dying or dead
Found a few resources, i macgyvered the rest

Reveals an unsuitable side, pride, nobodies helps better
Hate to be stuck in the middle but totally self centered

Orc - Another top notch verse here, flow was great, altho
I think maybe once or twice it felt a bit off but that would
just be nit picking, great imagery also used. My standout lines.

long after this proprietors gone, the night trickles on scribing the same
hiding it's pain, the story of night is neither gory nor light
- it's silence and rain..

& that an ire of hope could put a sire to rope in a golden empire molded in fire
a goal in a pyre, but if the streets the limit why does the sun float even higher?

So now to choose a winner, both verses were fantastic in there own right
which just makes this a very tough match to call, none of you deserve to
lose, but as they has to be a winner, overall Ive got Genocide just taking
this by a whisker, overall i just slightly perfered his verse. Great match.

V/ Genocide

02-17-2013, 11:44 AM	#1
Atheist Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 292 Battle Record: 4-10 Rep Power: 11913	Genocide - What I loved the most about your verse was the imagery, painted some great pictures in my mind The whole verse came together well & it made for a very entertaining read, nice job. Couple of lines I enjoyed. Only science exists, cause everything is dying or dead Found a few resources, i macgyvered the rest Reveals an unsuitable side, pride, nobodies helps better Hate to be stuck in the middle but totally self centered Orc - Another top notch verse here, flow was great, altho I think maybe once or twice it felt a bit off but that would just be nit picking, great imagery also used. My standout lines. long after this proprietors gone, the night trickles on scribing the same hiding it's pain, the story of night is neither gory nor light - it's silence and rain.. & that an ire of hope could put a sire to rope in a golden empire molded in fire a goal in a pyre, but if the streets the limit why does the sun float even higher? So now to choose a winner, both verses were fantastic in there own right which just makes this a very tough match to call, none of you deserve to lose, but as they has to be a winner, overall Ive got Genocide just taking this by a whisker, overall i just slightly perfered his verse. Great match. V/ Genocide