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Old 10-17-2013, 07:54 PM   #8
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This was a really dope battle

Vivdly did his thing, killed it imo. Got at the topic nicely and flow was on point
My only grip was how the element of excitement started to drift and it became boring towards later parts of the verse

Certain, you went off in here, the detail, style, flow switchups and rhyme scheme tie ins were nuts. Very well crafted and vivdly drawn out. I got you with the win this week for staying on poiint as well as vivdly but delivering, imo, a far superior verse technically and stylistically. You simply outclassed your opponent

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