Mayhem Gardens: Feltanomics (Kaeo & Vulgar)

Kaeo Seru · 09-23-2013, 12:58 PM

Kaeo Seru
How you gone tell me how to tie my shoes but can't afford em
I sold my soul for these soles, but I bought em
A hard road I walk but at least a nigga comfortable
since I've paid for my time I'm just tryna stay punctual
its not what you know that makes a nigga functional
but how you apply it. keep ya mind on the science
if my appliance is violence, then what you will find is
a grind thats inclined to get you to buy this
Keep in mind its, supply and demand
it feeds on the need of supplies I command
if your need should rely on my brand
would it be awry of your stand to deny that I am
Integral to this part of the plan. a vinyl clutched
the final touch of an artist's hand
remember this during this judgement your passing
If you did your own killing would you need an assassin?

Vulgar
I'm a fiend for this passion but it comes with withdrawal symptoms
and equal detachment for the tongue that absolves with women
AR-15's do the yappin' amidst the hunger to rob the system
Mobbin' pilgrims wear the lauded emblem; souls are accosted kindred
seems you've become a damned breed, insanity has you
Who'd have thought we would be in debt for crooked family values?
In the land of the slouched moon, where Hell's shares vex
while mankind's bankrupt, the sun's energy's collecting welfare checks
so what if it melts their flesh? Tell em even though it's feeling pointless
The truth burns... nobody said it was a healing ointment

Wise Wiggles · 09-23-2013, 01:03 PM

In the land of the slouched moon, where Hell's shares vex
while mankind's bankrupt, the sun's energy's collecting welfare checks
so what if it melts their flesh? Tell em even though it's feeling pointless
The truth burns... nobody said it was a healing ointment

^ coolness bro

Read the other one y'all did. Gave it a nod.

PancakeBrah · 09-23-2013, 01:59 PM

This reminds me of 'Roar' by Katy Perry

Kaeo Seru · 09-27-2013, 09:54 AM

bump

Kaeo Seru · 10-17-2013, 05:44 AM

...again.
prolly drop some new shit today tho

kys0 · 10-17-2013, 10:01 AM

dope

CopyPat · 10-17-2013, 03:20 PM

yes its good, you guys have proven this over and over... for me though i just find it boring.. sorry dudes just tryna be honest. there was just nothing there content wise to keep me interested..and the schemes werent over the top enough to offset that. feel me? again i know i put out alot of the same material too, and most ppl do in their own way actually to be honest.. but if its kinda more serious like this i just have no interest in it.. at least if its funny or random i want to see what happens but this just gives me no incentive. haha not hating. u guys know that. i just think ur too good to post stuff like this. try something different, weird, exciting. or at least mess around with waaay more syllables and intensify ur scheming, stay up fuckers

Mr. J · 10-17-2013, 07:42 PM

I was feeling Kaeo's beginning...the beginning of the beginning
that felt very well written, the rest was smooth too
your style is pretty cool but then it started bouncing around
Vulgar your verse was pretty sick as well, you always drop something dope
this was short and sweet, your second, third, fourth line?...
I forget but I liked how you built up towards the ending
I enjoyed the lines that Whys quoted as well...dope collab drop fellas

09-23-2013, 12:58 PM	#1
Kaeo Seru Keeper Of The Fresh Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Mayhem Gardens Posts: 84 Rep Power: 36	Mayhem Gardens: Feltanomics (Kaeo & Vulgar) Kaeo Seru How you gone tell me how to tie my shoes but can't afford em I sold my soul for these soles, but I bought em A hard road I walk but at least a nigga comfortable since I've paid for my time I'm just tryna stay punctual its not what you know that makes a nigga functional but how you apply it. keep ya mind on the science if my appliance is violence, then what you will find is a grind thats inclined to get you to buy this Keep in mind its, supply and demand it feeds on the need of supplies I command if your need should rely on my brand would it be awry of your stand to deny that I am Integral to this part of the plan. a vinyl clutched the final touch of an artist's hand remember this during this judgement your passing If you did your own killing would you need an assassin? Vulgar I'm a fiend for this passion but it comes with withdrawal symptoms and equal detachment for the tongue that absolves with women AR-15's do the yappin' amidst the hunger to rob the system Mobbin' pilgrims wear the lauded emblem; souls are accosted kindred seems you've become a damned breed, insanity has you Who'd have thought we would be in debt for crooked family values? In the land of the slouched moon, where Hell's shares vex while mankind's bankrupt, the sun's energy's collecting welfare checks so what if it melts their flesh? Tell em even though it's feeling pointless The truth burns... nobody said it was a healing ointment __________________

09-23-2013, 01:03 PM	#2
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	In the land of the slouched moon, where Hell's shares vex while mankind's bankrupt, the sun's energy's collecting welfare checks so what if it melts their flesh? Tell em even though it's feeling pointless The truth burns... nobody said it was a healing ointment ^ coolness bro Read the other one y'all did. Gave it a nod. __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

09-27-2013, 09:54 AM	#4
Kaeo Seru Keeper Of The Fresh Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Mayhem Gardens Posts: 84 Rep Power: 36	bump __________________

10-17-2013, 05:44 AM	#5
Kaeo Seru Keeper Of The Fresh Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Mayhem Gardens Posts: 84 Rep Power: 36	...again. prolly drop some new shit today tho __________________

10-17-2013, 03:20 PM	#7
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	yes its good, you guys have proven this over and over... for me though i just find it boring.. sorry dudes just tryna be honest. there was just nothing there content wise to keep me interested..and the schemes werent over the top enough to offset that. feel me? again i know i put out alot of the same material too, and most ppl do in their own way actually to be honest.. but if its kinda more serious like this i just have no interest in it.. at least if its funny or random i want to see what happens but this just gives me no incentive. haha not hating. u guys know that. i just think ur too good to post stuff like this. try something different, weird, exciting. or at least mess around with waaay more syllables and intensify ur scheming, stay up fuckers __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

09-23-2013, 01:59 PM	#3
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	This reminds me of 'Roar' by Katy Perry

10-17-2013, 10:01 AM	#6
kys0 Banned Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 49 Rep Power: 0	dope

10-17-2013, 07:42 PM	#8
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	I was feeling Kaeo's beginning...the beginning of the beginning that felt very well written, the rest was smooth too your style is pretty cool but then it started bouncing around Vulgar your verse was pretty sick as well, you always drop something dope this was short and sweet, your second, third, fourth line?... I forget but I liked how you built up towards the ending I enjoyed the lines that Whys quoted as well...dope collab drop fellas __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you