Dead Brain Cells (Freeverse)

Celph Taut · 10-17-2013, 06:38 PM

https://soundcloud.com/celph-taut/de...ells-freeverse

No mix/master

Threw a reverb on it n' let it rock...

Mr. J · 10-17-2013, 07:38 PM

I think you should add the lyrics to this..
other then that I think it was pretty good
your flow seems to work pretty well with the beat
voice is weird, but this is a weird world...keep it up

dead man · 10-22-2013, 11:26 AM

lmao this was dope dude.

you should definitely keep posting this kinda material over here. the tell me a story / acid bar had me laughing. you have a great energy when you rhyme. vibing.

it's black btw

PancakeBrah · 10-22-2013, 11:45 AM

This was awesome. Very laidback. I didn't like that vocal sample at the start of your first verse, I thought it made the track too busy and its place in the mix distracted me from the lyrics. That's my only complaint. I liked the first verse but the second verse was great, I listened to it a couple times through. Unique voice and delivery. It was almost staccato, at some points not. The rhyming and flow in the second verse was top notch. Glad I listened to this, will check out your other stuff if its at this level.

Darth Yoda · 10-22-2013, 11:56 AM

Same thing as pancake, the beginning was odd, but that was part of it I guess. So I liked it. The lyrics were cool. Obviously this isnt made in a million dollar studio, and we all know this. That'd be my only complaint. I don't want to make suggestions because you seem very well cemented in your style. Thanks

Certain · 10-22-2013, 12:04 PM

It reminded me of Gravediggaz with how you overstressed your rhymes at times and stopped and started a lot. Sometimes it seemed like you were stretching just to reach the beat, though. Mix your vocals to the front more.

Paradigm · 10-22-2013, 07:36 PM

CELPH BRO SUP MAN

glad to see you still doing your thing.

10-17-2013, 06:38 PM	#1
Celph Taut hey. Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 30 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 37	Dead Brain Cells (Freeverse) https://soundcloud.com/celph-taut/de...ells-freeverse No mix/master Threw a reverb on it n' let it rock...

10-17-2013, 07:38 PM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	I think you should add the lyrics to this.. other then that I think it was pretty good your flow seems to work pretty well with the beat voice is weird, but this is a weird world...keep it up __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

10-22-2013, 11:26 AM	#3
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	lmao this was dope dude. you should definitely keep posting this kinda material over here. the tell me a story / acid bar had me laughing. you have a great energy when you rhyme. vibing. it's black btw __________________ Zack Wicks for president

10-22-2013, 11:45 AM	#4
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	This was awesome. Very laidback. I didn't like that vocal sample at the start of your first verse, I thought it made the track too busy and its place in the mix distracted me from the lyrics. That's my only complaint. I liked the first verse but the second verse was great, I listened to it a couple times through. Unique voice and delivery. It was almost staccato, at some points not. The rhyming and flow in the second verse was top notch. Glad I listened to this, will check out your other stuff if its at this level. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

10-22-2013, 12:04 PM	#6
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	It reminded me of Gravediggaz with how you overstressed your rhymes at times and stopped and started a lot. Sometimes it seemed like you were stretching just to reach the beat, though. Mix your vocals to the front more. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-22-2013, 11:56 AM	#5
Darth Yoda Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 408 Battle Record: 6-2 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF Rep Power: 20182439	Same thing as pancake, the beginning was odd, but that was part of it I guess. So I liked it. The lyrics were cool. Obviously this isnt made in a million dollar studio, and we all know this. That'd be my only complaint. I don't want to make suggestions because you seem very well cemented in your style. Thanks

10-22-2013, 07:36 PM	#7
Paradigm ___________ Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 1,989 Battle Record: 4-4 Champed - The Ultimate Textcee - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11033512	CELPH BRO SUP MAN glad to see you still doing your thing.