ELEMENTS FINAL - Bags vs. Cashius - BAGS WINS 7-4

Just Write · 10-16-2013, 10:16 PM

ok this was a pretty good battle actually. you both should sign into the league. i thought cashius had great thing going through two verses then kinda lost steam and rushed through the second half of it. maybe rushing to meet the deadline or something but it was still a great read just thought it could have ended more smoothly. bags your format was fucking horrible and hard to read but i enjoyed the piece more than i disliked the format, you had some pretty clever lines scattered, the bolting down w/phillips head and the bill and ted/excellent lines being my favorite. i think cashius while writing a good piece came a little too plain where as bags got pretty creative in his writing, not the easiest vote but i think bags got my vote

10-16-2013, 10:16 PM	#7
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	ok this was a pretty good battle actually. you both should sign into the league. i thought cashius had great thing going through two verses then kinda lost steam and rushed through the second half of it. maybe rushing to meet the deadline or something but it was still a great read just thought it could have ended more smoothly. bags your format was fucking horrible and hard to read but i enjoyed the piece more than i disliked the format, you had some pretty clever lines scattered, the bolting down w/phillips head and the bill and ted/excellent lines being my favorite. i think cashius while writing a good piece came a little too plain where as bags got pretty creative in his writing, not the easiest vote but i think bags got my vote __________________