ELEMENTS FINAL - Bags vs. Cashius - BAGS WINS 7-4

NYCSPITZ · 10-16-2013, 01:51 AM

Both of you misinterpreted McCarthy's quote, which obviously alludes to enjoying the journey toward a firm goal; the goal is not the means to an end...the goal is obviously to enjoy the journey itself.

To be real I thought both pieces lacked depth and had an incredibly simple structure. Didn't really enjoy either but judging from battles, I read Cashius' and felt ehhhh bags probably got this. But then bags busted out some really wack chorus not in keeping with his white ethnicity, and the structure was god awful. I was disappointed here but I think cashius took it pretty easily with a relatively coherent but badly written verse.

V/ cashius

10-16-2013, 01:51 AM	#4
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	Both of you misinterpreted McCarthy's quote, which obviously alludes to enjoying the journey toward a firm goal; the goal is not the means to an end...the goal is obviously to enjoy the journey itself. To be real I thought both pieces lacked depth and had an incredibly simple structure. Didn't really enjoy either but judging from battles, I read Cashius' and felt ehhhh bags probably got this. But then bags busted out some really wack chorus not in keeping with his white ethnicity, and the structure was god awful. I was disappointed here but I think cashius took it pretty easily with a relatively coherent but badly written verse. V/ cashius