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10-15-2013, 11:14 AM
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The Clown Prince
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This was pretty nice the opener was pretty slick
I really enjoyed the second half. very well written reminds me of me when I can't sleep the flow was keen The little braggodocio vibe you have fits the message you convey keep it up
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