Feeble Minded vs Penlord

trap. · 02-16-2013, 02:52 PM

Penlord

..I'm straight up smackin' this bitch fag, plus, Penlord's here to kick-ass,
& he'll be bearing the mark of a God.. just from getting the whiplash.
Lol @ you getting a grip on my punches, but you should look son, for help,
You saw my verse in Advance...... But really could use some yourself.
I don't give a fuck what you thought about me, you won't survive here,
And no I DON'T expect you to be happy, when you've been at it for 5 years.
I'll fuckin' kill this fool, he fronts, but this retard is a flaky whiner,
And it's funny you took one good bar out of a 36 line verse..
............... Then countered it with one good bar in an 18 liner.
In-fact, I'll completely match you, thought you would bring confusion,
'Cuz Feeble's vision to be the best text-head... is a lot more like an illusion.
I thought you would drop excitement, <- Yeah right, 'cuz I plot sick
But I admit you're Virtually Priceless!.... & off the net you're not shit.
I'm done with all of these raw-hits, plus I'm tired of reading his nonsense,
And I'd say you've decreased in thought,
................. But that would mean you've proceeded in progress.
I'm doubted to win, yeah, but there's no actin', this rookie's hardy,
Whilst Feeble's latest updates in what's dope... Just happen to be tardy.
His kind is rare, I'm pacin', *wish less retards were hoggin' the placement*,
Shit..... feeble not having an =, now seems more like a positive statement.

Feeble Minded

"Kid's are lookin' for last week's sequel, I'm evil, with all this drama non-stop
When I tell you to keep it real, Feeble. <- he does so without the comma & dot"

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Damn. I woulda thought PMing the voters was hurting your chance
But I'll give you a breakdown...
Shitty, shitty, shitty. as if that required seeing your verse in advance
I'm in awe of your tactics, therefore I'm not friendly with glares
I thought we left PMing to noobs.. but you didn't change anything there
I've got the heart to rip, this bitch till he's torn apart & shit
Throughout ya verse, is what you should've done before you started it
I'll knee throats, if it takes that for you to see you'll never be dope
If I'm trying to spot a faggot.. I'll have to give you some free votes
& don't support my ego. suffice to say I'm too godly to need it
it's funny you're talking about going more, like anybody will read it
You'll resent Mind after I destroy you for coming with your spent rhymes...
your lines won't even hold interest unless your verse contains percent signs
I'll play off this bastard's fear, cuz you're gonna get plastered queer
fuck rapping, use of the PM system is the only thing you've mastered here
Fucking loser, my lifestyle will leave you glowing with envy
I've seen Pen's raps... the only parties dope at is never going to any
Kids acting like you never heard of me, then you never heard of shit
Chances are we wont get it twizted, at least if you worded it

Winner: Feeble Minded

02-16-2013, 02:52 PM	#1
trap. Senior Citizen Join Date: Aug 1997 Posts: 3,870 Battle Record: 4-3 Rep Power: 0	Feeble Minded vs Penlord Penlord ..I'm straight up smackin' this bitch fag, plus, Penlord's here to kick-ass, & he'll be bearing the mark of a God.. just from getting the whiplash. Lol @ you getting a grip on my punches, but you should look son, for help, You saw my verse in Advance...... But really could use some yourself. I don't give a fuck what you thought about me, you won't survive here, And no I DON'T expect you to be happy, when you've been at it for 5 years. I'll fuckin' kill this fool, he fronts, but this retard is a flaky whiner, And it's funny you took one good bar out of a 36 line verse.. ............... Then countered it with one good bar in an 18 liner. In-fact, I'll completely match you, thought you would bring confusion, 'Cuz Feeble's vision to be the best text-head... is a lot more like an illusion. I thought you would drop excitement, <- Yeah right, 'cuz I plot sick But I admit you're Virtually Priceless!.... & off the net you're not shit. I'm done with all of these raw-hits, plus I'm tired of reading his nonsense, And I'd say you've decreased in thought, ................. But that would mean you've proceeded in progress. I'm doubted to win, yeah, but there's no actin', this rookie's hardy, Whilst Feeble's latest updates in what's dope... Just happen to be tardy. His kind is rare, I'm pacin', wish less retards were hoggin' the placement, Shit..... feeble not having an =, now seems more like a positive statement. Feeble Minded "Kid's are lookin' for last week's sequel, I'm evil, with all this drama non-stop When I tell you to keep it real, Feeble. <- he does so without the comma & dot" . . . Damn. I woulda thought PMing the voters was hurting your chance But I'll give you a breakdown... Shitty, shitty, shitty. as if that required seeing your verse in advance I'm in awe of your tactics, therefore I'm not friendly with glares I thought we left PMing to noobs.. but you didn't change anything there I've got the heart to rip, this bitch till he's torn apart & shit Throughout ya verse, is what you should've done before you started it I'll knee throats, if it takes that for you to see you'll never be dope If I'm trying to spot a faggot.. I'll have to give you some free votes & don't support my ego. suffice to say I'm too godly to need it it's funny you're talking about going more, like anybody will read it You'll resent Mind after I destroy you for coming with your spent rhymes... your lines won't even hold interest unless your verse contains percent signs I'll play off this bastard's fear, cuz you're gonna get plastered queer fuck rapping, use of the PM system is the only thing you've mastered here Fucking loser, my lifestyle will leave you glowing with envy I've seen Pen's raps... the only parties dope at is never going to any Kids acting like you never heard of me, then you never heard of shit Chances are we wont get it twizted, at least if you worded it Winner: Feeble Minded