A Poem for my sister

Dope girl · 10-13-2013, 08:30 PM

C-Creative
L-Loveable
A-Allstar
U- Unique
D-Dime
I-Intelligent
A-Angel

Certain · 10-13-2013, 10:34 PM

Nice! I especially liked "Dime."

What's your sister's name?

CopyPat · 10-13-2013, 11:11 PM

W -what is the point of this
A - are u honestly serious with all ur "open mics" ?
C - C'mon....
K - K, seriously...ur not actually a real person, right?

e11even · 10-14-2013, 02:50 AM

She's someone's troll. I'm "new" and I know that. lol. You can't possibly be this basic by mistake.

Dope girl · 10-14-2013, 12:01 PM

This is suppose to be a Poem about My Sister Claudia, & thanks for the feedback c!

Zen · 10-14-2013, 12:03 PM

Dg you're so fuckin ill.

Certain · 10-14-2013, 12:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mizz Millionaire

This is suppose to be a Poem about My Sister Claudia, & thanks for the feedback c!

Did you know that the poem spells out her name? That's crazy. It's like, if you take the first letter of every word, those letters are C-L-A-U-D-I-A. That spells "Claudia."

Is she pretty?

Dope girl · 10-14-2013, 12:17 PM

Thanks Z & its words Desribe her.

Certain · 10-14-2013, 12:18 PM

She sounds great. Is she single?

Dope girl · 10-14-2013, 12:19 PM

She's beautiful.

Dope girl · 10-14-2013, 12:20 PM

She got a man

Certain · 10-14-2013, 12:21 PM

He's probably not better than me.

Zen · 10-14-2013, 12:26 PM

I just noticed this spelled out her name. Damn I see something new about this piece every time I see it.

Certain · 10-14-2013, 12:27 PM

It's made me rethink writing.

Zen · 10-14-2013, 12:29 PM

It's made me rethink life.

Wise Wiggles · 10-14-2013, 01:44 PM

Nice multies

Inno · 10-14-2013, 02:02 PM

DG DA GAWD!!!

Mr. J · 10-14-2013, 02:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Certain

It's made me rethink writing.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zenland

It's made me rethink life.

Hahaha

Dope girl · 10-14-2013, 03:20 PM

thanks for those who likes it!

10-13-2013, 08:30 PM	#1
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	A Poem for my sister C-Creative L-Loveable A-Allstar U- Unique D-Dime I-Intelligent A-Angel

10-13-2013, 11:11 PM	#3
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	W -what is the point of this A - are u honestly serious with all ur "open mics" ? C - C'mon.... K - K, seriously...ur not actually a real person, right? __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

10-14-2013, 02:50 AM	#4
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	She's someone's troll. I'm "new" and I know that. lol. You can't possibly be this basic by mistake. __________________ Ahem.

10-14-2013, 12:18 PM	#9
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	She sounds great. Is she single? __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-14-2013, 12:21 PM	#12
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	He's probably not better than me. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-13-2013, 10:34 PM	#2
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Nice! I especially liked "Dime." What's your sister's name?

10-14-2013, 12:01 PM	#5
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	This is suppose to be a Poem about My Sister Claudia, & thanks for the feedback c!

10-14-2013, 12:03 PM	#6
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Dg you're so fuckin ill.

10-14-2013, 12:17 PM	#8
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	Thanks Z & its words Desribe her.

10-14-2013, 12:19 PM	#10
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	She's beautiful.

10-14-2013, 12:20 PM	#11
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	She got a man

10-14-2013, 12:26 PM	#13
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	I just noticed this spelled out her name. Damn I see something new about this piece every time I see it.

10-14-2013, 12:27 PM	#14
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	It's made me rethink writing. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

10-14-2013, 12:29 PM	#15
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	It's made me rethink life.

10-14-2013, 01:44 PM	#16
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	Nice multies __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

10-14-2013, 02:02 PM	#17
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	DG DA GAWD!!!

10-14-2013, 03:20 PM	#19
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	thanks for those who likes it!