A. MADDEN -- non-sequiter the visceral

dead man · 10-08-2013, 01:50 AM

check

sporadic at best. photographic arrest, developing sight
paragraphs parasitic to write. the bible mentions me twice
fooled you once. acoustic rhythm taps molecular life
bearskin percussive set in maple. rawhide, stretching it tight
til instrumental delight is something easily played
green serenade. kudzu vine, whip cracks, leafy meringue
minimalistic, semi-consistent, clearly deranged
sentence derivative like collective experience, deleted or saved
believing is pain. peace is the raindrops buzzing at noon
until it reminds us that we've got something to do
sunrise dusky as dew. hustler pursuits in a duster, adieu
i'm off to look for substance to use. to fuck or to screw?
taking life for granted like it's custom for you
while i try to cherish every single lunch i consume
lustful and crude, love is abuse. i've cued a diversion
to discover love is simply what you'll do for a person.
music is purpose, beauty to worship, chiseled in stone
all we ever needed was a picture to hold
impressionistic repose. print still-life digital prose
watch it come alive. then kill itself with a rope
it's sacrificial, it's bone, dynamic socially strained
built an empire in my bedroom just to throw it away
microbial waves. throne in his grave, growth and decay
scribble multiples on multiple pages. but only today
i don't mean to be meaningful. just composing in vain
zirconium blades, open my brain to let neurosis escape
floating parades, globalized like xenophobia, AIDS
Alice's hole was her slavery, now she's holding her Chains
smoking flame, opiate-based, glass-blown bowlful of haze
behaviors trace what biometric coding engrains
total disdain for methodology, dogmatic determinists
chaos captured Copernicus. a field of wrathful conservatives
passing for rational persons, nails scratching the surfaces
soon
there will be blood
better fasten your tourniquets.

A. MADDEN

Wise Wiggles · 10-08-2013, 01:56 AM

Favorite verse I've read in a great while. Classic Blacketh..

#therealgoat #fuckaillnika #realrecognizereal

beegee · 10-08-2013, 02:45 PM

sporadic at best. photographic arrest, developing sight
paragraphs parasitic to write. the bible mentions me twice
fooled you once. acoustic rhythm taps molecular life
bearskin percussive set in maple. rawhide, stretching it tight
til instrumental delight

loved this intro

zirconium blades, open my brain to let neurosis escape
floating parades, globalized like xenophobia, AIDS
Alice's hole was her slavery, now she's holding her Chains
smoking flame, opiate-based, glass-blown bowlful of haze

what ? raw....

dead man · 10-08-2013, 07:51 PM

Thanks beegee. You're a swell guy.

Wise for preZ

dead man · 10-10-2013, 10:39 PM

voting links:

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=22973
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=20983

King Ra. · 10-11-2013, 10:40 AM

The dead man IS alive. Sup Black.

Just get'n back into action & what better way to gain even more motivation than to stumble upon one of your pieces. The style is impeccable, never gets dull/boring and it's kudos to how you continue to string words together masterfully, drop some dope content and concepts & deliver a well-rounded script.

This started off pretty well but I started geek'n when I got to that middle section all the way down to the end.

music is purpose, beauty to worship, chiseled in stone
all we ever needed was a picture to hold
impressionistic repose. print still-life digital prose
watch it come alive. then kill itself with a rope
^....that last line here was icing on the cake.

zirconium blades, open my brain to let neurosis escape
floating parades, globalized like xenophobia, AIDS
Alice's hole was her slavery, now she's holding her Chains
smoking flame, opiate-based, glass-blown bowlful of haze
behaviors trace what biometric coding engrains
^.... spazz session ignited.

Always a great experience to read your drops, sir. I don't see you in the AOWL this season? Hopefully you get in if you aren't already. Maybe we can collab some time. Great work. Holler.

Sho Money EMG · 10-11-2013, 12:20 PM

This shit was real dope Black. Ur vocabulary is astounding and very impressive. Always enjoy reading ur work it's so polished and witty. Sometimes the words u use I don't even understand lmao. But yeah thisnwas my fav part

believing is pain. peace is the raindrops buzzing at noon
until it reminds us that we've got something to do
sunrise dusky as dew. hustler pursuits in a duster, adieu
i'm off to look for substance to use. to fuck or to screw?
taking life for granted like it's custom for you
while i try to cherish every single lunch i consume
lustful and crude, love is abuse. i've cued a diversion
to discover love is simply what you'll do for a person.
music is purpose, beauty to worship, chiseled in stone
all we ever needed was a picture to hold

rediculous great drop homie

dead man · 10-11-2013, 02:40 PM

@King Ra. thanks man and i'm taking a few weeks off from the season. just another deadline I can't manage to keep. don't need another one of those in life atm.

thanks sho. good to see you're frequenting this section of the site. stay a while..

Certain · 10-12-2013, 02:37 AM

Was this your application essay to the Netcees.com Hall of Fame? That's what it read like, to me. Your writing is as fluid as ever, and the topic was pretty clear to me despite all the metaphors: I was reading a dead man verse about what it's like to read a dead man verse. That sort of topic is cool. This was sort of a self-reflection boast. It's not a reflection of your thoughtfulness as much as your simple ability to rhyme better than most.

My favorite part:

Quote:

believing is pain. peace is the raindrops buzzing at noon
until it reminds us that we've got something to do
sunrise dusky as dew. hustler pursuits in a duster, adieu
i'm off to look for substance to use. to fuck or to screw?
taking life for granted like it's custom for you
while i try to cherish every single lunch i consume

ill nik-A · 10-12-2013, 09:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wise Ways

Favorite verse I've read in a great while. Classic Blacketh..

#therealgoat #fuckaillnika #realrecognizereal

#uwackbutyourinfatuationisfunny

NYCSPITZ · 10-14-2013, 09:31 AM

nasty af

NYCSPITZ · 10-14-2013, 09:35 AM

Your luminous lexicon, sporadically lascivious and at turns laconic or lavish, is a luxury. I liken your phrashing to a meat starved sex animal tortured at a tibetan monastery for five celibate years (also no burgers) due to STD spreading in the southeastern U.S., namely alabama. Your extreme foundation of murdering mundane miscreants maliciously makes more mayhem mature. Alliteration is LOL but honestly McDonalds breakfast w/ mild picante sauce? Almost as delicious as the dish served via pixels by blacketh the caucasian paradox.

10-08-2013, 01:50 AM	#1
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	A. MADDEN -- non-sequiter the visceral check sporadic at best. photographic arrest, developing sight paragraphs parasitic to write. the bible mentions me twice fooled you once. acoustic rhythm taps molecular life bearskin percussive set in maple. rawhide, stretching it tight til instrumental delight is something easily played green serenade. kudzu vine, whip cracks, leafy meringue minimalistic, semi-consistent, clearly deranged sentence derivative like collective experience, deleted or saved believing is pain. peace is the raindrops buzzing at noon until it reminds us that we've got something to do sunrise dusky as dew. hustler pursuits in a duster, adieu i'm off to look for substance to use. to fuck or to screw? taking life for granted like it's custom for you while i try to cherish every single lunch i consume lustful and crude, love is abuse. i've cued a diversion to discover love is simply what you'll do for a person. music is purpose, beauty to worship, chiseled in stone all we ever needed was a picture to hold impressionistic repose. print still-life digital prose watch it come alive. then kill itself with a rope it's sacrificial, it's bone, dynamic socially strained built an empire in my bedroom just to throw it away microbial waves. throne in his grave, growth and decay scribble multiples on multiple pages. but only today i don't mean to be meaningful. just composing in vain zirconium blades, open my brain to let neurosis escape floating parades, globalized like xenophobia, AIDS Alice's hole was her slavery, now she's holding her Chains smoking flame, opiate-based, glass-blown bowlful of haze behaviors trace what biometric coding engrains total disdain for methodology, dogmatic determinists chaos captured Copernicus. a field of wrathful conservatives passing for rational persons, nails scratching the surfaces soon there will be blood better fasten your tourniquets. A. MADDEN __________________ Zack Wicks for president Last edited by dead man; 10-09-2013 at 12:56 AM.

10-08-2013, 01:56 AM	#2
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	Favorite verse I've read in a great while. Classic Blacketh.. #therealgoat #fuckaillnika #realrecognizereal __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

10-08-2013, 07:51 PM	#4
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	Thanks beegee. You're a swell guy. Wise for preZ __________________ Zack Wicks for president Last edited by dead man; 10-09-2013 at 12:53 AM.

10-10-2013, 10:39 PM	#5
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	voting links: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=22973 http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=20983 __________________ Zack Wicks for president

10-11-2013, 12:20 PM	#7
Sho Money EMG Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Location: Zooyork Posts: 2,124 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 0	This shit was real dope Black. Ur vocabulary is astounding and very impressive. Always enjoy reading ur work it's so polished and witty. Sometimes the words u use I don't even understand lmao. But yeah thisnwas my fav part believing is pain. peace is the raindrops buzzing at noon until it reminds us that we've got something to do sunrise dusky as dew. hustler pursuits in a duster, adieu i'm off to look for substance to use. to fuck or to screw? taking life for granted like it's custom for you while i try to cherish every single lunch i consume lustful and crude, love is abuse. i've cued a diversion to discover love is simply what you'll do for a person. music is purpose, beauty to worship, chiseled in stone all we ever needed was a picture to hold rediculous great drop homie __________________ Sho Money \| Camp Bell Team Alpha EMG This site is whack

10-08-2013, 02:45 PM	#3
beegee Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 32 Rep Power: 0	sporadic at best. photographic arrest, developing sight paragraphs parasitic to write. the bible mentions me twice fooled you once. acoustic rhythm taps molecular life bearskin percussive set in maple. rawhide, stretching it tight til instrumental delight loved this intro zirconium blades, open my brain to let neurosis escape floating parades, globalized like xenophobia, AIDS Alice's hole was her slavery, now she's holding her Chains smoking flame, opiate-based, glass-blown bowlful of haze what ? raw....

10-11-2013, 10:40 AM	#6
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932963	The dead man IS alive. Sup Black. Just get'n back into action & what better way to gain even more motivation than to stumble upon one of your pieces. The style is impeccable, never gets dull/boring and it's kudos to how you continue to string words together masterfully, drop some dope content and concepts & deliver a well-rounded script. This started off pretty well but I started geek'n when I got to that middle section all the way down to the end. music is purpose, beauty to worship, chiseled in stone all we ever needed was a picture to hold impressionistic repose. print still-life digital prose watch it come alive. then kill itself with a rope ^....that last line here was icing on the cake. zirconium blades, open my brain to let neurosis escape floating parades, globalized like xenophobia, AIDS Alice's hole was her slavery, now she's holding her Chains smoking flame, opiate-based, glass-blown bowlful of haze behaviors trace what biometric coding engrains ^.... spazz session ignited. Always a great experience to read your drops, sir. I don't see you in the AOWL this season? Hopefully you get in if you aren't already. Maybe we can collab some time. Great work. Holler.

10-11-2013, 02:40 PM	#8
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	@King Ra. thanks man and i'm taking a few weeks off from the season. just another deadline I can't manage to keep. don't need another one of those in life atm. thanks sho. good to see you're frequenting this section of the site. stay a while.. __________________ Zack Wicks for president

10-14-2013, 09:31 AM	#11
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	nasty af

10-14-2013, 09:35 AM	#12
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	Your luminous lexicon, sporadically lascivious and at turns laconic or lavish, is a luxury. I liken your phrashing to a meat starved sex animal tortured at a tibetan monastery for five celibate years (also no burgers) due to STD spreading in the southeastern U.S., namely alabama. Your extreme foundation of murdering mundane miscreants maliciously makes more mayhem mature. Alliteration is LOL but honestly McDonalds breakfast w/ mild picante sauce? Almost as delicious as the dish served via pixels by blacketh the caucasian paradox.