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10-14-2013, 01:23 AM
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ghost in the matrix
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Strong showing from both, Mr j your take was very creative an the beggar storyline was cool. Your wording in some places were awesome too, just a strong drop in general.
vivid you also came creative and I thought the repetition and back story was enough to edge it out. My vote goes to vivid for a more "full" story and a bit more character development. Good shit guys an sorry for the short vote
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