The superstar is broken.

dead man · 10-13-2013, 10:54 PM

this was another awesome verse. i think you are emerging as one of my favorites as far as purely topical writing is concerned. you know how to breathe life into an idea and really execute the shit out of it.

of course being from where i am i was immediately drawn to this. Derrick has returned with a vengeance and will put on for his city in a major way this year. so many haters in our city which is pathetic given how much Derrick has represented and led our team to the best of his ability.

thanks for this one certain, i have read it a few times and enjoyed it more each time.

props

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10-13-2013, 10:54 PM	#1
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	this was another awesome verse. i think you are emerging as one of my favorites as far as purely topical writing is concerned. you know how to breathe life into an idea and really execute the shit out of it. of course being from where i am i was immediately drawn to this. Derrick has returned with a vengeance and will put on for his city in a major way this year. so many haters in our city which is pathetic given how much Derrick has represented and led our team to the best of his ability. thanks for this one certain, i have read it a few times and enjoyed it more each time. props 1 __________________ Zack Wicks for president