WK1: c.d.m. (0-0) VS. dead man (0-0) [DEAD MAN WINS, 9-0.]

Inno · 02-14-2013, 10:21 PM

DM

this was some next level shit foreal. your imagery is fucking amayzaing tho. dam and the flow was flawless really no bumps or stalls anywhere in the verse. you took the picture and ran with it foreal. the tone of your piece was nice to i felt like it was well written piece performed by an orchestra lol. it fet like you brought the stares themself to life in your verse. thought that was fucking ill yom props man no complaints here.

cdm

this was an adventure ttbh. i mean jesus man this was some intricidly woven storyline wiith a great rhyme scheme and it flowed fairly well man at time it seemed to lose it self in the mass that you created..still dope as fuck tho. three different timelines with the same character..thought the three differnet timelines of the same character really drove your two repeating lines. that whole shit was fucking out of control ill lol. but it felt like the picture got lost in your story from time to time great stuff though man..

overall

this was a sick battle, two dope writers droping some dope shit. in the end though i gotta go with deadman...to be honest this could go either way but i felt like dm had a more polished scheme and story. both equal in mechanics. i was feeling dm's story a bit more. amazing battle.

vote deadman

02-14-2013, 10:21 PM	#11
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	DM this was some next level shit foreal. your imagery is fucking amayzaing tho. dam and the flow was flawless really no bumps or stalls anywhere in the verse. you took the picture and ran with it foreal. the tone of your piece was nice to i felt like it was well written piece performed by an orchestra lol. it fet like you brought the stares themself to life in your verse. thought that was fucking ill yom props man no complaints here. cdm this was an adventure ttbh. i mean jesus man this was some intricidly woven storyline wiith a great rhyme scheme and it flowed fairly well man at time it seemed to lose it self in the mass that you created..still dope as fuck tho. three different timelines with the same character..thought the three differnet timelines of the same character really drove your two repeating lines. that whole shit was fucking out of control ill lol. but it felt like the picture got lost in your story from time to time great stuff though man.. overall this was a sick battle, two dope writers droping some dope shit. in the end though i gotta go with deadman...to be honest this could go either way but i felt like dm had a more polished scheme and story. both equal in mechanics. i was feeling dm's story a bit more. amazing battle. vote deadman