Deep In My Cellar

Eŋg · 10-09-2013, 08:05 PM

delete your post and take another day to craft a comeback, again. make it better this time.

I am the seller, the keeper of the message
you should either go to sleep with depressants
or understand the weaker is in my presence
the sweetest of essence...waiting
and I, keep them buried deep in my collection
playing with them til' I deem my impressions
are you ready? or even seasoned to perfection?
I doubt it, branch out then weed out connections...
rooted deep in your mind, leave out direction...

this was like, the peak of all sections. or something. it was super fresh and the cohesion like the way the rhymes like matched up perfectly - ooooooOOOOooooh, let's tessellate (not me and you, i'm paraphrasing) - really made me sit and contemplate life. a bit. got dem feels, tbh. i prefer the colder climate, got that Inuit bloodline/reading your verse with ennui. laughing. world kinda quiet, tho. not laughing.

10-09-2013, 08:05 PM	#7
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	delete your post and take another day to craft a comeback, again. make it better this time. I am the seller, the keeper of the message you should either go to sleep with depressants or understand the weaker is in my presence the sweetest of essence...waiting and I, keep them buried deep in my collection playing with them til' I deem my impressions are you ready? or even seasoned to perfection? I doubt it, branch out then weed out connections... rooted deep in your mind, leave out direction... this was like, the peak of all sections. or something. it was super fresh and the cohesion like the way the rhymes like matched up perfectly - ooooooOOOOooooh, let's tessellate (not me and you, i'm paraphrasing) - really made me sit and contemplate life. a bit. got dem feels, tbh. i prefer the colder climate, got that Inuit bloodline/reading your verse with ennui. laughing. world kinda quiet, tho. not laughing.