Escape The Pain

[Scripter]

I thought you had decent flow, rhyme scheme and you had a decent message.

This was my favorite part because it is controversial. Although I think you could of done a little more research on the subject. This would allowed you to expand a little more on your thoughts, and even helped you find new ideas.

"My time is spent..& the cost for the life u live.. is typa big
.... & ur forced to pay.. They feed u all these taxes & shit
To give a bunch of cash to some pricks who aren't even actually sick
I laugh at this shit,
.... but know... It's fuckin what the government does
Just gives me another reason not to believe in what's rly under their rug"

I just think it would be a little naive to negate the huge gape between the rich and the poor, and truly believe your taxes are paying for lazy people. Next stop Hoover-ville but that's just my opinion, dam keep writing!