WK1: Genocide (0-0) VS. Orc (0-0) [GENOCIDE WINS, 10-2.]

Zen · 02-14-2013, 01:08 PM

Best battle I've read in the league so far forreal. Both yall came good as hell. Props.

Genocide: I felt that your verse had more imagery throughout with a nice flow to patch it all together. Adolf Spitler definatly came with the blitz in the first few lines haha. The viciousness you came in with in the first half of your verse was better I felt than the last half but still was solid throughout. Also the lines of the man being the painting of hell I think you said was my favorite line of the whole battle. Very good geno.
Orc: I'm not really sure I've read any of your OMs or topicals so your verse took me by surprise to actually how good it was. Very good rhyme scheme but to me it felt like some of the lines were long winded and fucked the flow up but those were few and far between. As genos started off fire and went out towards the end to me, I felt that yours actually started off slow and picked up towards the end and led into a climax of sorts. Very entertaining piece for sure.

Best battle so far you two. My hat goes off to both of you but I gotta vote for somebody, and for me I gotta vote Orc in a close battle

02-14-2013, 01:08 PM	#1
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Best battle I've read in the league so far forreal. Both yall came good as hell. Props. Genocide: I felt that your verse had more imagery throughout with a nice flow to patch it all together. Adolf Spitler definatly came with the blitz in the first few lines haha. The viciousness you came in with in the first half of your verse was better I felt than the last half but still was solid throughout. Also the lines of the man being the painting of hell I think you said was my favorite line of the whole battle. Very good geno. Orc: I'm not really sure I've read any of your OMs or topicals so your verse took me by surprise to actually how good it was. Very good rhyme scheme but to me it felt like some of the lines were long winded and fucked the flow up but those were few and far between. As genos started off fire and went out towards the end to me, I felt that yours actually started off slow and picked up towards the end and led into a climax of sorts. Very entertaining piece for sure. Best battle so far you two. My hat goes off to both of you but I gotta vote for somebody, and for me I gotta vote Orc in a close battle