WK1: Rawn MacDon (0-0) VS. Innovator (0-0) [INNOVATOR WINS, 6-2.]

Geno · 02-14-2013, 12:33 PM

This was a dope battle, great topic tbr. So many things culd have been done here.

Innovator, thought you really got into your storyline well man. I was impressed to see a good set of mechanics come out of you. I say that cause I'm not familiar with your work and find it rare that a new face is well grounded. The concept is played tbh. But you captured it well. Had some good imagery at times. Nothing that really blew me away creativity wise. Which would have been a huge tilt for you here.

Rawn, my dude..
You slept hard man. Could have done so much with this piece dog.. I mean the knowledge of some shit that you have would have made it easy for you to take this win easily accomplished for you. But!.... it seeems to me that a: you either just took your not well known opponent a little too softly, or b: you just lacked the time and inspiration for this battle.
You had some nice lines in your piece, but as a whole I feel like you missed man. You could have killed this with just a little more effort bruh. Schemes were dope in areas. One or two misses. But mechanically sound as usual homie.

Gotta say though. Thisbattle, in my eyes.. is an upset this week. I think we all woulda said rawn easily in our prdictions. But I honestly have innovator taking this one. Not by much though. Which is what the upset is.. cause I expected much more from rawn

V-Innovator

02-14-2013, 12:33 PM	#9
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	This was a dope battle, great topic tbr. So many things culd have been done here. Innovator, thought you really got into your storyline well man. I was impressed to see a good set of mechanics come out of you. I say that cause I'm not familiar with your work and find it rare that a new face is well grounded. The concept is played tbh. But you captured it well. Had some good imagery at times. Nothing that really blew me away creativity wise. Which would have been a huge tilt for you here. Rawn, my dude.. You slept hard man. Could have done so much with this piece dog.. I mean the knowledge of some shit that you have would have made it easy for you to take this win easily accomplished for you. But!.... it seeems to me that a: you either just took your not well known opponent a little too softly, or b: you just lacked the time and inspiration for this battle. You had some nice lines in your piece, but as a whole I feel like you missed man. You could have killed this with just a little more effort bruh. Schemes were dope in areas. One or two misses. But mechanically sound as usual homie. Gotta say though. Thisbattle, in my eyes.. is an upset this week. I think we all woulda said rawn easily in our prdictions. But I honestly have innovator taking this one. Not by much though. Which is what the upset is.. cause I expected much more from rawn V-Innovator __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*