RD1: Bags vs. Shogun Dinero aka Gamble - {Bags wins by TKO}

[Beyond]

.... Still wonder how hes considered a vet. You'll live to regret after this. As for ur life? I wish u the best.
It aint me fantasizing. When I set this MAN ON FIRE, its only right I Mark Anthony for imminent death...
.... & this what u get. Bags is a fucking bitch an only worthy for, preparing my turkey sauce.
We could play quick & the dead - talking out his ass - listen how full of shit he is, when Dirty draws...

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This is the end yo. U think i give a fuck about ur friends bro?
Im damon waynes w/razor blades.... carving FAGGOT on their headstone
U gettin amped as shit & thats swell...but stop kiddin yaself
pump ya brakes or that drive'll be the end of u.....just ask tim & danielle
Im swimmin in bitches my breast stroke hurtin these hoes
His first breast stroke was followed by carving the rest of the turkey alone
Tryed to get the battle on sum swag shit....dude wats next?
U wanna pick a different trade? OK. Trade places with ur two dead friends


Cool battle. Meth was okay. Bit basic considering how long the line is and how much you had to work with. Wording could be smoother, too. You could cut out so many words to make the line more concise and hit harder. Josh Freeman is obscure to me. Sorry, man. High & Bi is pretty played by now. Karaoke been around a hot minute. Aerodom line could of been better. Would of used Dominate instead of domination. Also, your most stretched line yet. Mark Anthony was a pretty dope concept. Could of been better, but still probably your best line yet. Dirty draws pretty good concept, too. You just need to make your lines more concise and make your wording smoother. Too many pauses, this ain't longbar. Seen tons of better Miley lines lately (twerk). This one needed more than a 'making an ass out of yaself' connection. Thanksgiving was a good idea for a personal, but you didn't make it harsh enough. See my battle with Arch if he shows for how to flip a self-personal harshly against your opponent. Tieing to a chair and making him eat Thanksgiving with you isn't really hard-hitting. Bags opener was a decent jab. Nothing too harsh yet. Carving faggot was harsh as fuck, though. Hit very hard. Those are the types of lines I'm trying to get into now. Good man. Tim & Danielle wasn't freshest concept ever and not as harsh as previous line, but better than first IMO. Salvage yard wasn't really feeling too much. Could of been harsher. Flintsone vitamins was alright, too. Another jab. Breast stroke was roflz. Set-up was pretty good, too. That's more like it. Late is real played, but I did like the Strikta mag punchline. Relevant. Swag & Flow was cool. Closer was possibly second harshest line of the battle. Strong finish. Overall, battle wasn't really close. Jason's lines are just too stretched here and his wording is too longbar. Needs to make his lines shorter and more concise. Harsher, etc. He had some good concepts and showed some nice creativity, though. Silver lining. Either way, Bags got this with a lot harsher and hard-hitting verse. Props to both.

/v bags