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Old 10-06-2013, 06:47 PM   #10
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Spitz - Dope verse, amazing imagery and flat out good fucking writing in general. There isn't one thing I hated, the entire verse start to end had solid flow, sick imagery, emotion and overall dopeness in words. Only negative thing i have is....Not sure how to tie this to topic, but top notch writing regardless.

Vulgar - Strong writing, enjoyable read with just a concept that's out there. Extremely different and you took a shot I feel. I loved the verse up until the end, wasn't fond of character going to the IRS. Everything else was far above average which for you I guess is normal?


BOTW for sure. Two verses that would have won verse everything I've read thus far.

In the end, I have to give this to NYC. Both had different takes on the topic, both executed at the highest of levels. but the deciding factor was the emotion I felt from I felt from the lynching, that and it was a twist I didn't see coming to be honest

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