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Old 10-05-2013, 10:59 AM   #5
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Excellent work, both of you, but for me there was a clear winner

Both had pretty evenly matched lyricism, multies, flow, all that shnazz, but as for what concept was gleaned from the Lombardi quote, NYC, that was some fine storytelling, shit, at first I was happy with it just being a tree's POV and what you did with that, but then you through some KKK shit in there and I was like OMG, SMH in disbelief that I couldn't come up with another abbreviation...
Fucking killed it, all the way through

And vulgar, yours was also pretty damn good and really the only complaint I have is the overuse of the name Abe... Shit just got weird sounding.

Due to the extreme creativity of NYC's tree POV of the KKK, and the Abe stuff

VOTE - NYC
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