Week 2 - Innovator (0-1) vs. Zenland (0-1) - ZENLAND WINS 6-0

Mr. J · 10-04-2013, 07:22 PM

LOOOOOOOOL

i don't even know what to say after that first piece...
but to be fair to your opponent Zen i feel like I have to say something
Zen-I enjoyed the very thought of your piece because it has character
and not many people are willing to take it a step further & add more to it
some lack that vibe that propels their piece beyond the norm
very, very nice work my dude...kept me reading...

Innovator-Your piece had some shine to it, but I'll be honest
your opponent brought it this week and I feel you may have slighted yourself
the piece is dope, but I feel you cut it off too short & didn't put your all in
and if you did, I suggest you bring more to the table next time
the flow of your piece has this inexplicable detail that is missing
you may have suffered from it slightly...either way nice work

v/Zen

10-04-2013, 07:22 PM	#5
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	LOOOOOOOOL i don't even know what to say after that first piece... but to be fair to your opponent Zen i feel like I have to say something Zen-I enjoyed the very thought of your piece because it has character and not many people are willing to take it a step further & add more to it some lack that vibe that propels their piece beyond the norm very, very nice work my dude...kept me reading... Innovator-Your piece had some shine to it, but I'll be honest your opponent brought it this week and I feel you may have slighted yourself the piece is dope, but I feel you cut it off too short & didn't put your all in and if you did, I suggest you bring more to the table next time the flow of your piece has this inexplicable detail that is missing you may have suffered from it slightly...either way nice work v/Zen __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you