WK1: Coup (0-0) VS. ZenLand (0-0) [ZENLAND WINS, 7-0.]

Geno · 02-13-2013, 06:36 PM

Cool battle.

Zenland held it down with a dope concept of what the picture had to offerin a fairly obvious way. Good structure, nothing really off the wall crazy as far as content was concerned. I mean pretty much just held a smooth flow with solid ideas that connected well to the piece. Went in the sort of direction I probably would have gone with this pic

Coupe
Thought you went a little more abstract and didn't exactly grasp the picture as full on. What you had were some pretty nice ideas that really.. to me, could have been about a lot of things other than this pic. Not to nitpick about not relating to your picture to much.. but also found some of you lines to be awkward in structure/format.. seemed a little off at times. Can't say I disliked your piece. Thought you did your thing, I just wasn't as fond of it as I was zenland. Enjoyed what you brought though sr. Work on relativity.

This was really close battle honestly, and my breakdowns may suck a little in this battle -sorry for that.

Bottom line though. I felt zenlands more "direct" display of ability to connect to his image hit harder this week than coupes abstract and perhaps more imaginative concepts did.

Vote -zen

02-13-2013, 06:36 PM	#12
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Cool battle. Zenland held it down with a dope concept of what the picture had to offerin a fairly obvious way. Good structure, nothing really off the wall crazy as far as content was concerned. I mean pretty much just held a smooth flow with solid ideas that connected well to the piece. Went in the sort of direction I probably would have gone with this pic Coupe Thought you went a little more abstract and didn't exactly grasp the picture as full on. What you had were some pretty nice ideas that really.. to me, could have been about a lot of things other than this pic. Not to nitpick about not relating to your picture to much.. but also found some of you lines to be awkward in structure/format.. seemed a little off at times. Can't say I disliked your piece. Thought you did your thing, I just wasn't as fond of it as I was zenland. Enjoyed what you brought though sr. Work on relativity. This was really close battle honestly, and my breakdowns may suck a little in this battle -sorry for that. Bottom line though. I felt zenlands more "direct" display of ability to connect to his image hit harder this week than coupes abstract and perhaps more imaginative concepts did. Vote -zen __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*