Week 2 - Just Write (0-0) vs. Aesthetic (1-0) - JUST WRITE WINS BY NS

Mike Wrecka · 09-30-2013, 04:42 PM

Season 2

Rules

Verse Due Date - Thursday 23:59 PST

Voting Deadline - Sunday 23:59 PST

Line Limits - 16 - 48 Max can be higher if both agree

Voting - Must vote on 3 battles and post voting links in this thread , preferably edit it in the check in

If you don't vote on 3 battle you will be given a loss
If you lose by votes and don't vote on other battles you receive a one week suspension

Topic

Obstacles are what you see when you take your eye off the goal. - Vince Lombardi

Good Luck @Just Write @Aesthetic

Aesthetic · 10-01-2013, 11:13 AM

Goodluck, check.

Just Write · 10-04-2013, 02:40 AM

Shawn had it easy, always at the head of his class
A logical student who was also gifted in math
Just give him a task and watch him quickly complete it
The kid was a genius with a promising path
A captain and standout in every sport that he played
Scholarships lined up from duke, to his home town of P.A.
Voted best looking in school, though wasn't one to flaunt it
When it came to women he could have whichever he wanted
It was common for shawn when he went out of his way
If a friend needed help he'd volunteer his time for the day
Everybody loved him, and this was equally shown
But shawn had a secret, see there was evil at home
At 5 shawn was adopted, along with four other kids
Locked in their rooms at night, they had a camera above em
The clark's didn't love them, they were just in it to win
paycheck on the 1st and trips to the bank, cashin em in.

Constantly beaten he had to find some type of excuses
That's why shawn joined the football team, to hide all the bruises
Being told that he's incompetent, awkward and useless
Only made him stronger and smarter, and he wanted to prove it
It Gave him a push needed to be a mathamatical genius
In fact as a sophomore he wrote a collegant caliber thesis
Astounding with speeches, they say he had a golden tongue
They didn't know it came from hours in the mirror trying to hold himself up
He was never shown no love, and didn't know how to be treated
So when a woman approached him he either hid or retreated
He felt simply defeated with yet a sense of progression
He learned to adapt and move about in many different directions
He learned an obstacle is only an obstacle it you continue to let it
Grow into a hopeless notion til it's over, forget it.
Look past all the skeptics, Smile! It's all part of the show
Cuz If you take your eyes off the goal, you know you'll regret.

09-30-2013, 04:42 PM	#1
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	Week 2 - Just Write (0-0) vs. Aesthetic (1-0) - JUST WRITE WINS BY NS Season 2 Rules Verse Due Date - Thursday 23:59 PST Voting Deadline - Sunday 23:59 PST Line Limits - 16 - 48 Max can be higher if both agree Voting - Must vote on 3 battles and post voting links in this thread , preferably edit it in the check in If you don't vote on 3 battle you will be given a loss If you lose by votes and don't vote on other battles you receive a one week suspension Topic Obstacles are what you see when you take your eye off the goal. - Vince Lombardi Good Luck @Just Write @Aesthetic __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

10-04-2013, 02:40 AM	#3
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	Shawn had it easy, always at the head of his class A logical student who was also gifted in math Just give him a task and watch him quickly complete it The kid was a genius with a promising path A captain and standout in every sport that he played Scholarships lined up from duke, to his home town of P.A. Voted best looking in school, though wasn't one to flaunt it When it came to women he could have whichever he wanted It was common for shawn when he went out of his way If a friend needed help he'd volunteer his time for the day Everybody loved him, and this was equally shown But shawn had a secret, see there was evil at home At 5 shawn was adopted, along with four other kids Locked in their rooms at night, they had a camera above em The clark's didn't love them, they were just in it to win paycheck on the 1st and trips to the bank, cashin em in. Constantly beaten he had to find some type of excuses That's why shawn joined the football team, to hide all the bruises Being told that he's incompetent, awkward and useless Only made him stronger and smarter, and he wanted to prove it It Gave him a push needed to be a mathamatical genius In fact as a sophomore he wrote a collegant caliber thesis Astounding with speeches, they say he had a golden tongue They didn't know it came from hours in the mirror trying to hold himself up He was never shown no love, and didn't know how to be treated So when a woman approached him he either hid or retreated He felt simply defeated with yet a sense of progression He learned to adapt and move about in many different directions He learned an obstacle is only an obstacle it you continue to let it Grow into a hopeless notion til it's over, forget it. Look past all the skeptics, Smile! It's all part of the show Cuz If you take your eyes off the goal, you know you'll regret. __________________

10-01-2013, 11:13 AM	#2
Aesthetic Pimp Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: N/W Posts: 1,068 Battle Record: 1-12 Rep Power: 0	Goodluck, check.