VBB/KNK PRESENT: Detour vs Lakhryth (SHIT GETS AIRED OUT LOL)

[Zen]

I'll give constructive criticism without meaning to be a dick. The flow was good, but the problem I had with this was that you talked about shooting him and shit like that throughout the verse and only delivering a few punches. The punches you did do were ok considering the time restraints. Another thing, stop flailing your arms. That shit made me cringe honestly. If I was battling you I would bust out laughing if you flailed your arms like that. Js.
So my advice would be to stop telling people you'll shoot them and insult them more without flailing your arms.

[detour]

Originally Posted by Zenland

I'll give constructive criticism without meaning to be a dick. The flow was good, but the problem I had with this was that you talked about shooting him and shit like that throughout the verse and only delivering a few punches. The punches you did do were ok considering the time restraints. Another thing, stop flailing your arms. That shit made me cringe honestly. If I was battling you I would bust out laughing if you flailed your arms like that. Js.
So my advice would be to stop telling people you'll shoot them and insult them more without flailing your arms.

u know it's funny cuz I've been thinking the same thing about the arm motions...it's hard sometimes, cuz as a rapper u tend to keep ur rhythm a lot with ur hands...plus, didn't get to rehearse...definitely something I've been tryna calm down tho hahaha...an word @ it going too fast, I think I was tryin too hard to snap on the guy cuz I wasn't as comfortable with the material...all great advice tbh...