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09-29-2013, 09:53 AM
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Really great, good effort especially for the selects the view; skeptical playing around with the language and rhyme schemes. It has been said that English is a bad language for rhyming when compared to other languages. Perhaps that is correct but it is not clear when slant rhyming is utilized so well. Also enjoyed the 'oxymoronic' and the 'viral spiraling' wordplays and the all of the subtle alliterations.
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