Week 1 - Vulgar vs. Adonis - VULGAR WINS 6-4

Zen · 09-26-2013, 11:11 AM

Nice showing from both writers.

Vulgar- The flow on this was great. Using vocab like you did in this piece and maintaining the flow is not an easy thing to do. I went back and reread through this shit after I read it and still enjoyed it. Good solid technical ability displayed here. Nice
Adonis- This was another great piece here imo. The line about glorifying stars instead of recognizing madness was fucking dope. Good flow on this but in some places there were slight hiccups to me, but that's possibly my fault. All in all definitely enjoyed this shit and went back and reread this piece as well.

This has the potential to be BOTW imo, and I've got to go against the grain on my vote and vote for Adonis. I just enjoyed his piece more. Props to both of yall.

09-26-2013, 11:11 AM	#10
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Nice showing from both writers. Vulgar- The flow on this was great. Using vocab like you did in this piece and maintaining the flow is not an easy thing to do. I went back and reread through this shit after I read it and still enjoyed it. Good solid technical ability displayed here. Nice Adonis- This was another great piece here imo. The line about glorifying stars instead of recognizing madness was fucking dope. Good flow on this but in some places there were slight hiccups to me, but that's possibly my fault. All in all definitely enjoyed this shit and went back and reread this piece as well. This has the potential to be BOTW imo, and I've got to go against the grain on my vote and vote for Adonis. I just enjoyed his piece more. Props to both of yall.