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09-25-2013, 06:40 PM
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Dude this had such crisp wording that it made the flow dam near perfect when I read it. Not one unwantrd pause or moments of getting lost in the scheme. I mean yeah at first glance this seems some what simple but to be honest the content was dope as fuck.like I mentioned before each line just rolled off the tongue. ...it almost feels like this could be for audio...crisp wording my freind..enjoyed the read. ..keep posting
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