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Nigma · 09-23-2013, 08:56 PM

First line didn't make sense to me, almost left the page expecting the verse to be forced rhymes for the sake of sounding good, but the rest of the verse was pretty chill. We've got a few members of the site who pull the same style off (although strictly content based, they do it a bit better). I'd like to see you write on something meaningful, or more... interesting for lack of a better word. This drop was cool tho, just kinda about generic content for the most part. Trapped in a dwarves song was cool, tons of nice rhymes. Stick around, I wanna see what you're capable of

09-23-2013, 08:56 PM	#3
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	First line didn't make sense to me, almost left the page expecting the verse to be forced rhymes for the sake of sounding good, but the rest of the verse was pretty chill. We've got a few members of the site who pull the same style off (although strictly content based, they do it a bit better). I'd like to see you write on something meaningful, or more... interesting for lack of a better word. This drop was cool tho, just kinda about generic content for the most part. Trapped in a dwarves song was cool, tons of nice rhymes. Stick around, I wanna see what you're capable of __________________