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09-23-2013, 04:15 AM
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Very cool rhyme schemes, but seemingly random content. Though
it was a fun read, it felt empty in places and full of buried emotion in others. i think i saw a few things on your mind, but i seemed to come off as a shopping list, so to speak, of subjects and moods... big jump from the last few joints though. Keep bangin.
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