AHEM! There's SAND on my boots!

e11even · 09-22-2013, 06:26 AM

paint the town red and use the entrails as banisters

dug that.

I share the same ettiquite & train with veterans
raised out of a different page in the age of excellance
aided neglecence to the heavens & set flame to a Pegasus
take that with your high horse...
I only speak to myself because confidence is a divine source
tear down everything else & leave the signs torched

Way better flow and scheme here... its like it took you a second to
wake up. I find myself doing that pretty often lol. I think a better
scheme transition should be developed seeing as how that high horse line,
however fitting in content, had an abrupt feel in terms of scheme.

Good shit. I'll try my hand at more abstract pieces myself. Keep doin ya thing J.

09-22-2013, 06:26 AM	#3
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	paint the town red and use the entrails as banisters dug that. I share the same ettiquite & train with veterans raised out of a different page in the age of excellance aided neglecence to the heavens & set flame to a Pegasus take that with your high horse... I only speak to myself because confidence is a divine source tear down everything else & leave the signs torched Way better flow and scheme here... its like it took you a second to wake up. I find myself doing that pretty often lol. I think a better scheme transition should be developed seeing as how that high horse line, however fitting in content, had an abrupt feel in terms of scheme. Good shit. I'll try my hand at more abstract pieces myself. Keep doin ya thing J. __________________ Ahem.