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Join Date: Jul 2013
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@namesake -- Please provide 2 voting links!
Anyways... edited all FP's out and opened for votes. Guy is still in the closet, though it looks like MC Hammer came out [avy] So we know smoking cigs ain’t the only time we see a fag in his mouth Decent opener.. basic and simple but a okay direct personal shot Accepting this he sounded ‘so serious,’ more like Heath Ledger to me He’s the shit? Then I’ll wipe my ass with this ‘Scott’ without givin a fuck, like celibacy This was good... I’ve seen his disses, he’s weak and subpar, to the point where there’s almost no need to respond It may be my fault for leadin him on…though I tick…he must’ve thought he was the bomb Not feeling this to much to be honest He’s the type to ask a dude out for a bite and eat off the same plate So if that happen, I’ll ‘Smashmouth’ n “disconnect the ‘dot’” just for ‘namesake’ Creative and pretty cool bar here. The setup was no relevance though Whose takin bets to see how many name flips this lame spits So I’ll do the same shit but the razor I came wit sees ya veins slit, leavin ‘name’ split! Focused to much on the multies here.... the punch was whatever Overall: I am glad to see a fellow RR member jump on this board... and hopefully stay active. Your top punch was the smashmouth line (creative) and the opener (small direct personal). Otherwise it was a hit and miss. Focus more on your setups to have relevance to the main punch... Don't ruin your punch because you want to show off multi-strings. U don't get women on their knee's, STOP!!!, u needa start stepping up ya game if a bitch put's tic tac in her mouth... it's a sure bet she's freshening up for name I get the NP but it just didn't hit for me. I seen MANY tictac NP's and this is one of the weakest Dudes been on that research tip, STOP!!!, 'n found my RB alias from 2008 & by the looks of things, he also found most of his concepts from around that date Good personal here and good shot. Some of his concepts are outdated. Calling you played's an understatement, s'like me saying I'll put tic tac in box? but props on being the first lame battler to make me pull out all the STOP's!!! The setup was approaching a bomb punch.. but then it flattened to me Man I've had to reword this because of feeding claim's, but it's whatever mods are you ''serious''ly tryna punch? cuz fo real, even math hoffa doe's a better job Okay line here... decent jab Fool think's ''RR'll body bag NC''? cunt must be retarded?... we'll bust head's fuck a punch here's a personal, he's rated highly there .................. nuff said!!!! I get where your going and its cool with the self-pride on NC... but RR is a pretty respected site..I'll give you a decent punch here. Overall: I think majority of your verse (originally) was dependant on the feed. With the edit you stuck a pretty wack punch there. Your setups on some was bomb but then your punch fell flat to me. Your concepts are good but your just not piecing them together for that 'sting' finisher. The TicTac NP was kind of W/e relating it to you and a generic 'ready for me' type of BS. Your best bar was the concept in 2008 theme... that was alright. I get where your going in a closer but RR is pretty respected just saying Overall vote: This was a tough one and pretty close. Tic Tac came with a somewhat okay verse with 2 good hits, 1 decent and the others were just whatever. Name came with 1 good hit, 1 decent, and rest kind of fell flat after a good setup. Im gonna give this to Tic barely edging this out for a full honest vote. Keep active you two.
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