Self-Centricity, in stages

Mr. J · 09-17-2013, 06:17 PM

i've recycled time enough to know it's better to waste
i've devolved into a prototype. repetitive, fake
it was over the second they gave the devil a face.
my demons are dollars. endorsements, checking at Chase
spent on any substance that presents an escape.
i'm evil. stupid. selfish. all those negative traits
but i'm centered. almost perfect. true perfection awaits
passion in these parables, poetic for praise
^^^^

great minds must also share these parallels
nice work throughout the whole thing
I'm not quite sure if this was for one of the leagues
or on your own time, but the way it was weaved so perfectly deserves more observance
keep doing your thing

09-17-2013, 06:17 PM	#20
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	i've recycled time enough to know it's better to waste i've devolved into a prototype. repetitive, fake it was over the second they gave the devil a face. my demons are dollars. endorsements, checking at Chase spent on any substance that presents an escape. i'm evil. stupid. selfish. all those negative traits but i'm centered. almost perfect. true perfection awaits passion in these parables, poetic for praise ^^^^ great minds must also share these parallels nice work throughout the whole thing I'm not quite sure if this was for one of the leagues or on your own time, but the way it was weaved so perfectly deserves more observance keep doing your thing __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you