Siberia

Neighbor · 09-16-2013, 01:15 AM

My coat of arms is the Evil Eye.. y'all woke the heart of a sleeping giant
Screechin tires & screamin sirens - get blown apart when I'm squeezing iron
Load the cartridge & leave you dyin w/ blows as hard as stone carvings on Easter Island
The Young Boss; fuck strong suited, I'm Tony Stark w/ Extremis virus
No code of honor.. I'm in lucrative dealings w/ Lucifer's legions
Me & Kubrick have mutual feelings; leave a crucifix bleeding blue from the ceiling
At your funeral wielding two dual Uzis, unleashin bullets through the usual proceedings
Shoot the roof 'til it's peeling & use it to shield me - let ya family go through w/ the healing
Praise God as ya witness.. my brain's gone from existence
I slay martyrs - cave drawings depicted my blade slaughtering victims
The grave robber, keep a tre in Jane Fonda condition
Only trade stocks when that gauge locked in position; straight marketing gimmicks
A chainsaw in the grips of Kane Hodder, I'm vicious as slave auctioning bidders
Neigh palming the heat -
So pay homage or get Trayvon'd if it's beef like Dave Thomas' kitchen
That hammer airin like Bam Margera.. it's massive hysteria
I'm Captain America, strapped for whatever on Planet Terror w/ no natural predators
Castin reflections like Dracula's presence; my casket's been buried for half a millennia
'Til I wake up in darkness, pull the stake out my heart & splash it w/ Everclear
Last Emperor.. highly respected, you tryna go line-for-line w/ the best?
When that cannon squeeze, it's Brandon Lee; y'all faggots can die for your set

Wise Wiggles · 09-16-2013, 01:18 AM

@namix

Edit: from praise god to Dave Thomas' kitchen was my fav section.

zygote · 09-16-2013, 09:40 AM

".. it's massive hysteria
I'm Captain America, strapped for whatever on Planet Terror w/ no natural predators
Castin reflections like Dracula's presence; my casket's been buried for half a millennia"

Enjoyed it a lot, this type of rhyming format and aggressive boasting/insulting is appealing. The rhyming phrases are innovative and creative, liked the wide range of references from marketing gimmicks to Easter Island. It was very enjoyable to read.

dull boy · 09-16-2013, 10:18 AM

Dope.

Geno · 09-16-2013, 07:12 PM

Smh. No collab vs yet?

Geno · 09-16-2013, 07:12 PM

This was illy btw

StarFaggot · 09-16-2013, 07:20 PM

The Young Boss; fuck strong suited, I'm Tony Stark w/ Extremis virus

I slay martyrs - cave drawings depicted my blade slaughtering victims
The grave robber, keep a tre in Jane Fonda condition

I'm Captain America, strapped for whatever on Planet Terror w/ no natural predators

Meeeeean... Definitely the best textcee at doing multis on horrocore and gun lines... Nice delivery

Neighbor · 09-16-2013, 09:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Genocide

Smh. No collab vs yet?

I threw this together in like 20 minutes w/ lines I had lying around

I wanna write some new shit specifically for our collab.. it'll murder

Leave links for me, guys

Wise Wiggles · 09-16-2013, 10:29 PM

you would literally murder detour. that's why he ducks you. he knows it.

NYCSPITZ · 09-17-2013, 01:03 AM

dope

lmao @ aero coming into om leaving horrible shallow feed and d/r his fellow punchline battlers...some things never change...wait tho OM pieces are wack b/c "where is the audio"...well aero text battling is wack b/c where is the audio? We all know you'd get ate on KOTD

Wise Wiggles · 09-17-2013, 01:05 AM

lol

CopyPat · 09-17-2013, 01:13 AM

haha so sick. def top 3 all time to ever read anything they post. if this is 20 mins thats fuckin redunk

too dope with the references, scheming like a beast.. i try to emulate that typa scheming for sure. too many quotables because of the sick name drops. hahaha sick sick sickness

what also makes u dope is that u blend the harder fuck u style with straight knowledge of cool shit and smartly used vocab/references. its not dumbed down at all, theres always something behind what ur saying as far as the punchline.. its not random shit.

Awesome!!

oh p.s. yeah im def down for a collab. we'll just shit all over what ppl know about scheming haha

Plot · 09-17-2013, 01:51 AM

That was mad Mal

StarFaggot · 09-17-2013, 02:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NYCSPITZ

dope

lmao @ aero coming into om leaving horrible shallow feed and d/r his fellow punchline battlers...some things never change...wait tho OM pieces are wack b/c "where is the audio"...well aero text battling is wack b/c where is the audio? We all know you'd get ate on KOTD

lol whats good ma? You've got a problem with me? You mad cuz daddy hasn't been feeding your drops? Well send links to all your drops to my PM and I'll feed all of them within 10hrs of submittal.

NYCSPITZ · 09-17-2013, 12:23 PM

lol...

I'd rather not receive horrible feed from a 30 second look-over, thanks though

Dove Dozer · 09-17-2013, 12:43 PM

Damn. First piece ive read from you and wow. Mad dope.

I strive to write like this.

Thanks for the dope read. Can you feed my open mic? Im gettin slept on like crazy. I dont think i suck THAT bad.

Peep this

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=17462

Its about my perfect world.

Holler

Mr. J · 09-17-2013, 05:58 PM

The first section of this was straight flames
next you picked up with some sick visuals and metaphors
kept it moving with some strong ass rhyme schemes
then ended it with a nod to one of the great horror stories
slick shit all around, I enjoyed the guano

Zombie · 09-18-2013, 02:14 PM

so pay homage and get trayvoned. this has very unique rhythms to it. i like your word usage but i see a bit of skepticism in uniformity to yourself.

dead man · 09-18-2013, 04:39 PM

neigh your avatar is lolz. dude looks so different nowadays.

e11even · 09-19-2013, 04:46 AM

that was a beast. definitely worth the read and the awe. loved it.

09-16-2013, 01:15 AM	#1
Neighbor Genghis Khan Vuitton Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,304 Battle Record: 30-10 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Pic Key Grand Prix - 1-2 Season 1 - Newbie Tournament II - Fight Night LXII - Fight Night XLII - Fight Night XXXIII - Fight Night XXVI - BA Swag & Flow - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - Netcees Battle League(2x) - BA Slugfest II - Fight Night of Champions - Fight Night LXXXIII - Summer Classic X Rep Power: 34764468	Siberia My coat of arms is the Evil Eye.. y'all woke the heart of a sleeping giant Screechin tires & screamin sirens - get blown apart when I'm squeezing iron Load the cartridge & leave you dyin w/ blows as hard as stone carvings on Easter Island The Young Boss; fuck strong suited, I'm Tony Stark w/ Extremis virus No code of honor.. I'm in lucrative dealings w/ Lucifer's legions Me & Kubrick have mutual feelings; leave a crucifix bleeding blue from the ceiling At your funeral wielding two dual Uzis, unleashin bullets through the usual proceedings Shoot the roof 'til it's peeling & use it to shield me - let ya family go through w/ the healing Praise God as ya witness.. my brain's gone from existence I slay martyrs - cave drawings depicted my blade slaughtering victims The grave robber, keep a tre in Jane Fonda condition Only trade stocks when that gauge locked in position; straight marketing gimmicks A chainsaw in the grips of Kane Hodder, I'm vicious as slave auctioning bidders Neigh palming the heat - So pay homage or get Trayvon'd if it's beef like Dave Thomas' kitchen That hammer airin like Bam Margera.. it's massive hysteria I'm Captain America, strapped for whatever on Planet Terror w/ no natural predators Castin reflections like Dracula's presence; my casket's been buried for half a millennia 'Til I wake up in darkness, pull the stake out my heart & splash it w/ Everclear Last Emperor.. highly respected, you tryna go line-for-line w/ the best? When that cannon squeeze, it's Brandon Lee; y'all faggots can die for your set __________________ Even signing my autograph’s like writing a slaughter pact Last edited by Neighbor; 09-16-2013 at 01:27 AM.

09-16-2013, 01:18 AM	#2
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,507 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788019	@namix Edit: from praise god to Dave Thomas' kitchen was my fav section. __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch" Last edited by Wise Wiggles; 09-16-2013 at 09:43 AM.

09-16-2013, 07:12 PM	#5
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,330 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Smh. No collab vs yet? __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

09-16-2013, 07:12 PM	#6
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,330 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	This was illy btw __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

09-16-2013, 07:20 PM	#7
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,110 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	The Young Boss; fuck strong suited, I'm Tony Stark w/ Extremis virus I slay martyrs - cave drawings depicted my blade slaughtering victims The grave robber, keep a tre in Jane Fonda condition I'm Captain America, strapped for whatever on Planet Terror w/ no natural predators Meeeeean... Definitely the best textcee at doing multis on horrocore and gun lines... Nice delivery __________________ [B][CENTER][SIZE="5"] It's Aero join me at RAPBATTLES[/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]

09-16-2013, 09:40 AM	#3
zygote Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 502 Battle Record: 33-12 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Art of Writing League (3x) Rep Power: 737825	".. it's massive hysteria I'm Captain America, strapped for whatever on Planet Terror w/ no natural predators Castin reflections like Dracula's presence; my casket's been buried for half a millennia" Enjoyed it a lot, this type of rhyming format and aggressive boasting/insulting is appealing. The rhyming phrases are innovative and creative, liked the wide range of references from marketing gimmicks to Easter Island. It was very enjoyable to read.

09-16-2013, 10:18 AM	#4
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,075 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345601	Dope.

09-16-2013, 10:29 PM	#9
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,507 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788019	you would literally murder detour. that's why he ducks you. he knows it. __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

09-17-2013, 01:03 AM	#10
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,033 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743544	dope lmao @ aero coming into om leaving horrible shallow feed and d/r his fellow punchline battlers...some things never change...wait tho OM pieces are wack b/c "where is the audio"...well aero text battling is wack b/c where is the audio? We all know you'd get ate on KOTD

09-17-2013, 01:05 AM	#11
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,507 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788019	lol __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

09-17-2013, 01:13 AM	#12
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742222	haha so sick. def top 3 all time to ever read anything they post. if this is 20 mins thats fuckin redunk too dope with the references, scheming like a beast.. i try to emulate that typa scheming for sure. too many quotables because of the sick name drops. hahaha sick sick sickness what also makes u dope is that u blend the harder fuck u style with straight knowledge of cool shit and smartly used vocab/references. its not dumbed down at all, theres always something behind what ur saying as far as the punchline.. its not random shit. Awesome!! oh p.s. yeah im def down for a collab. we'll just shit all over what ppl know about scheming haha __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

09-17-2013, 01:51 AM	#13
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	That was mad Mal

09-17-2013, 12:23 PM	#15
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,033 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743544	lol... I'd rather not receive horrible feed from a 30 second look-over, thanks though

09-17-2013, 12:43 PM	#16
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,079 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853213	Damn. First piece ive read from you and wow. Mad dope. I strive to write like this. Thanks for the dope read. Can you feed my open mic? Im gettin slept on like crazy. I dont think i suck THAT bad. Peep this http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=17462 Its about my perfect world. Holler __________________

09-17-2013, 05:58 PM	#17
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,033 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349679	The first section of this was straight flames next you picked up with some sick visuals and metaphors kept it moving with some strong ass rhyme schemes then ended it with a nod to one of the great horror stories slick shit all around, I enjoyed the guano __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

09-18-2013, 02:14 PM	#18
Zombie Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 125 Battle Record: 5-0 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 2645337	so pay homage and get trayvoned. this has very unique rhythms to it. i like your word usage but i see a bit of skepticism in uniformity to yourself.

09-18-2013, 04:39 PM	#19
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,469 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606676	neigh your avatar is lolz. dude looks so different nowadays. __________________ Zack Wicks for president

09-19-2013, 04:46 AM	#20
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247256	that was a beast. definitely worth the read and the awe. loved it.