Pick Your Poison ft. nO gOoD! and Genocide

Zen · 09-15-2013, 10:39 PM

Yall should record this shit. Had a dope vibe rolling through it that'd sound sick on audio. Surprised this hasn't gotten feed yet so I'll try to be in depth for all of you and give an up in the process.

NG you have a slick writing style that seems like it'd sound dope as hell on audio, which reminds me I ain't peeped one of your audios yet so I'm gonna do that tomorrow. Some of the lines felt stretched at first as I was reading it but then once I said it out loud it flowed together beautifully. Strong verse overall but the only complaint I have with it was there were no stand out lines in the piece. Still overall it was dope.

Geno the flow you had here was slick as hell with dope multi's throughout. Everytime I read one of your pieces I feel like you're angry at the world and screaming fuck you with your pen...I like that. If I did have a complaint about this it'd be the "symptoms tho" line. It just came off a little awkward to me, but besides that strong showing.

Mike to be honest you had my favorite verse of the piece here. Flowed perfectly with well executed multi's. The vocab imo was nothing special but sometimes the simplest things have the most effect and that's what your piece did. The standout line was the A-rod line. I lol'd at that shit lol.

As I said before you three should record this shit. Peace holmes.

09-15-2013, 10:39 PM	#5
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Yall should record this shit. Had a dope vibe rolling through it that'd sound sick on audio. Surprised this hasn't gotten feed yet so I'll try to be in depth for all of you and give an up in the process. NG you have a slick writing style that seems like it'd sound dope as hell on audio, which reminds me I ain't peeped one of your audios yet so I'm gonna do that tomorrow. Some of the lines felt stretched at first as I was reading it but then once I said it out loud it flowed together beautifully. Strong verse overall but the only complaint I have with it was there were no stand out lines in the piece. Still overall it was dope. Geno the flow you had here was slick as hell with dope multi's throughout. Everytime I read one of your pieces I feel like you're angry at the world and screaming fuck you with your pen...I like that. If I did have a complaint about this it'd be the "symptoms tho" line. It just came off a little awkward to me, but besides that strong showing. Mike to be honest you had my favorite verse of the piece here. Flowed perfectly with well executed multi's. The vocab imo was nothing special but sometimes the simplest things have the most effect and that's what your piece did. The standout line was the A-rod line. I lol'd at that shit lol. As I said before you three should record this shit. Peace holmes.