Camp Bell (1-0) vs. Defiant (0-0) DEFIANT WINS

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Originally Posted by Camp Bell

those lies you serve weak and extra soft
i bet defiant verse bleak, even tho this a separate loss
Kind of works
ima heavyweight that's dope and my scripts is sicker..
dude tryna mum, me...but I body wraps til it copycat egyptian figures
nope
i grip the trigger, pull it then pop a shot, see tragedy..
the bullet that hit you had a coppertop...that'll unplug D battery
eh
you think ya beef flattered me? i chief wit the greats, u suck!..
they show me crew love wit each new bud...you spend weeknds listening to drake, boo'd up
eh
his bitch into faith and bust nuts when we sext..
she only tryna crush me...but yall know defiant pussy is fucked in the end
really basic wordplay, rhyme was weak too
you the strong type?..never!, my punches crashed better heads
now THIS the newest most brutal KO of all time ever...not badweathers' thread
I like how you tried to work a forum thing into your verse, but it wasn't particularly hot here

Camp's improved, that opener was a pretty solid personal, and I felt like the closer was definitely on the right track. You're starting to get off the ground as it were. Keep at it, especially with namix's help you should be making strides soon.

Originally Posted by Defiant

yawn

you gotta new mentor?...you'll still get slayed cause you just bore
ironic u went to namix for new ideas, but your verse has more played ideas than before
okay
everyone thinks your a faggot n wants u gone, so dont lie kid
anyone could get known if they just band camp, like that girl from american pie did
lol
your punches have no impact and this brawl'll prove G
that theres zero reaction for campaign, like the reception of that will ferrell movie
alright
in the tournament u got crushed and was made to pay u see
in the first round they didnt just give knux an olive branch, he got a oak,pine and maple tree
solid
ya bitch cheated on u so many times, somethings gotta give sir
ya girls the type u only do when hammered, n she musta hit u w/ one to be seen w/ her
lol

Def had funny lines, good personals, all around solid verse. Camp's starting to get some bite in his lines, but Defiant's still the better battler. I can break down further if necessary, but this isn't too hard a decision.

V/ Defiant