BULLFIGHTING CHILDHOOD STORY: LIPOGRAM E

Zen · 09-10-2013, 07:13 AM

Zy your one of my favorite writers on here but this one is a step down from what I expect from you. I have the same complaints as certain has. It's just too simple in my opinion. I'm not sure what the constrain was that certain was talkin bout but something definitely affected this piece. If anyone else had written this I'd probably say they did good but not from zygote lol. As for the story I thought it was pretty good but still I wanted more from it. This is my opinion but hopefully you'll get more feed from my up

09-10-2013, 07:13 AM	#3
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Zy your one of my favorite writers on here but this one is a step down from what I expect from you. I have the same complaints as certain has. It's just too simple in my opinion. I'm not sure what the constrain was that certain was talkin bout but something definitely affected this piece. If anyone else had written this I'd probably say they did good but not from zygote lol. As for the story I thought it was pretty good but still I wanted more from it. This is my opinion but hopefully you'll get more feed from my up