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09-06-2013, 07:24 PM
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if youre looking for criticism, than the only thing I can conjure up is that the use of yoyr syllables arent coorilating in the same amount throughout the whole thing....but.if its poetry than thats perfectly fine. a song is a different story. other than that its perfect homie.
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