Unconditional Genocide.

Brian Bryan · 09-03-2013, 05:03 AM

I disagree, thought the first four lines were the most focused, after that the topic seemed to shift and it was like Geno was running on autopilot, just straight keystyling what came to mind, the multies became only at the end of the lines rather than the beginning too like in the first four, feel me?

This isn't to discredit him, I prefer it, too tight a grip on those things can ruin a piece. I prefer the looser feel. Just commenting as I see fit. :-)

09-03-2013, 05:03 AM	#1
Brian Bryan BITER Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: England Posts: 620 Battle Record: 4-0 Champed - Gimmick Battle League Rep Power: 0	I disagree, thought the first four lines were the most focused, after that the topic seemed to shift and it was like Geno was running on autopilot, just straight keystyling what came to mind, the multies became only at the end of the lines rather than the beginning too like in the first four, feel me? This isn't to discredit him, I prefer it, too tight a grip on those things can ruin a piece. I prefer the looser feel. Just commenting as I see fit. :-)