09-01-2013, 10:48 AM | #1 |
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The State of Text -Vent Piece.
To many gods here, not enough apostles to qoute
If we all had a bible, u dumb fucks'd follow what rawn probably wrote Fucking novelties old, but he knows as much as the next man -christ Enough to teach a drunken pancake how to do a kegstand rite Its like I lost faith in all you so called legends of text A bunch of clowns, that are known for some shit I could never respect HOF members have no relevance left, what's next on your list Sure u champed a lot of shit, but who cares when whats left of us quits Who's gonna remember you did, I've heard some cowardly shit But culdn't believe when I heard dull nd bwah were a personality split Its overpowering, sick, u got bags runnin round for the thrill in disguise When he should go back where he belongs, under ill nika-s eyes Its no surprise I can't seperate these newcomers from old Buncha fagots hiding behind new names is the truth fucking exposed While aeros fly around here cocky as fuck, hes GOW's ugliest hoe Shud climb ur own mountain of bullshit, wer u can run with the goats Somebody told me once, fuck a reputation and write what I feel Don't hide behind a fucking gimmick when there's real life to reveal So I type from the field, and fuck the feedback if you'd never relate I don't claim to be the best, but I can sure recognize when you aint Too many tears have been cried for this game, fucking bitches n fags Everybody wants that work, what part of the fucking business is that Rediculous trash, followed by crash landings from the highest of peaks id force the ones thinkin they the best, to set asside ther beliefs S'why I'm unique in my approach to u bitches, coaches n critics You love me -hate me, ex old fuckin ladies that are so inconsistent I get to flowing and this the typa post I drop on you queers, cheers Ain't a diss -its a vent, wanna point ur fucking fingers -try at the mirror
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09-01-2013, 12:12 PM | #2 |
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sick bro. this was back to your usual style. multis galore. love this style
geno one of the best OM writers ever. if people forgot, way to remind them.
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09-01-2013, 12:30 PM | #3 |
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not bad
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09-01-2013, 12:36 PM | #4 |
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Damn this was dope geno
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Piles of bodies on some 300 shit
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09-01-2013, 03:49 PM | #6 |
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this was dope as fuck
glad so many people is taking shots at the lazy ass so called vets |
09-02-2013, 11:01 AM | #7 |
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Word. Good to see y'all in here though. Preciate it
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09-02-2013, 12:40 PM | #8 |
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09-02-2013, 02:00 PM | #9 |
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nice diddy here. good shit as always. I liked:
Somebody told me once, fuck a reputation and write what I feel Don't hide behind a fucking gimmick when there's real life to reveal |
09-10-2013, 09:35 PM | #11 |
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Its no surprise I can't seperate these newcomers from old
Buncha fagots hiding behind new names is the truth fucking exposed While aeros fly aroud here cocky as fuck, hes gow's ugliest hoe Shud climb ur own mountain of bullshit, wer u can run with the goats ^LOL damn @Aero |
09-10-2013, 09:49 PM | #12 |
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Its like I lost faith in all you so called legends of text
A bunch of clowns, that are known for some shit I could never respect hof members have no relevance left, what's next on your list Sure u champed a lot of shit, but who cares when whats left of us quits So I type from the field, and fuck the feedback if you'd never relate I don't claim to be the best, but I can sure recognize when you aint Cool piece, good rhythm and some jabs. |
01-16-2019, 11:05 AM | #13 |
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Uppage. So relevant today
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01-17-2019, 12:34 AM | #14 |
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Its like I lost faith in all you so called legends of text
A bunch of clowns, that are known for some shit I could never respect followed by crash landings from the highest of peaks id force the ones thinkin they the best, to set asside ther beliefs This was cool. I like a good vent piece. The shot at me cool some friendly fire but I really do site disses don’t press your luck
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01-17-2019, 12:36 AM | #16 |
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Ohhhh I thought this was new lol I’m like who signed into that Starfaggot account and left feed lol.
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01-17-2019, 02:54 AM | #17 |
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Ya i alrdy know. We good though. Was just skimming old pages and found this so upped it. Glad u peeped. Thanx
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01-17-2019, 03:13 AM | #18 |
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Who the fuck ups shit from 6 years back...Sad bitches.
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01-18-2019, 06:40 PM | #19 |
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That shit stuck out to me too. Defo a dope read, good shit Geno.
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01-21-2019, 10:25 PM | #20 |
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This is a pretty dope piece, Genocide. Really no complaints, I believe the reason you think text is like this - you need to go on RR more - text is alive there. Here, it's okay though..used to be better I assume? lol..but this was pretty niice..good multi-syllabic rhyming..good structure..good rhyme schemes..I enjoy some of the one-liners..was dope and crisp..niice one man..glad to have you write something like this..niice one..keep it up..man..
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