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Geno 09-01-2013 10:48 AM

The State of Text -Vent Piece.
 
To many gods here, not enough apostles to qoute
If we all had a bible, u dumb fucks'd follow what rawn probably wrote
Fucking novelties old, but he knows as much as the next man -christ
Enough to teach a drunken pancake how to do a kegstand rite
Its like I lost faith in all you so called legends of text
A bunch of clowns, that are known for some shit I could never respect
HOF members have no relevance left, what's next on your list
Sure u champed a lot of shit, but who cares when whats left of us quits
Who's gonna remember you did, I've heard some cowardly shit
But culdn't believe when I heard dull nd bwah were a personality split
Its overpowering, sick, u got bags runnin round for the thrill in disguise
When he should go back where he belongs, under ill nika-s eyes
Its no surprise I can't seperate these newcomers from old
Buncha fagots hiding behind new names is the truth fucking exposed
While aeros fly around here cocky as fuck, hes GOW's ugliest hoe
Shud climb ur own mountain of bullshit, wer u can run with the goats
Somebody told me once, fuck a reputation and write what I feel
Don't hide behind a fucking gimmick when there's real life to reveal
So I type from the field, and fuck the feedback if you'd never relate
I don't claim to be the best, but I can sure recognize when you aint
Too many tears have been cried for this game, fucking bitches n fags
Everybody wants that work, what part of the fucking business is that
Rediculous trash, followed by crash landings from the highest of peaks
id force the ones thinkin they the best, to set asside ther beliefs
S'why I'm unique in my approach to u bitches, coaches n critics
You love me -hate me, ex old fuckin ladies that are so inconsistent
I get to flowing and this the typa post I drop on you queers, cheers
Ain't a diss -its a vent, wanna point ur fucking fingers -try at the mirror

Mike Wrecka 09-01-2013 12:12 PM

sick bro. this was back to your usual style. multis galore. love this style

geno one of the best OM writers ever. if people forgot, way to remind them.

Wise Wiggles 09-01-2013 12:30 PM

not bad

Allen Knight 09-01-2013 12:36 PM

Damn this was dope geno

Neighbor 09-01-2013 03:16 PM

Piles of bodies on some 300 shit

God Of War 09-01-2013 03:49 PM

this was dope as fuck

glad so many people is taking shots at the lazy ass so called vets

Geno 09-02-2013 11:01 AM

Word. Good to see y'all in here though. Preciate it

Zombie 09-02-2013 12:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Genocide (Post 138814)
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Who's gonna remember you did, I've heard some cowardly shit
But culdn't believe when I heard dull nd bwah were a personality split
mirror

lmao.

@BWHAHA @dull boy

oats 09-02-2013 02:00 PM

nice diddy here. good shit as always. I liked:

Somebody told me once, fuck a reputation and write what I feel
Don't hide behind a fucking gimmick when there's real life to reveal

Rawn M.D. 09-03-2013 04:30 AM

Dope sht as always geno my favorite line was quoted above about reputation btw.. Smooth flow n scheme tho

lol I was waiting for a Tf reference that never came..

but I made opener on a Richard Corey level @Diode

Vulgar 09-10-2013 09:35 PM

Its no surprise I can't seperate these newcomers from old
Buncha fagots hiding behind new names is the truth fucking exposed
While aeros fly aroud here cocky as fuck, hes gow's ugliest hoe
Shud climb ur own mountain of bullshit, wer u can run with the goats
^LOL damn

@Aero

StarFaggot 09-10-2013 09:49 PM

Its like I lost faith in all you so called legends of text
A bunch of clowns, that are known for some shit I could never respect
hof members have no relevance left, what's next on your list
Sure u champed a lot of shit, but who cares when whats left of us quits


So I type from the field, and fuck the feedback if you'd never relate
I don't claim to be the best, but I can sure recognize when you aint



Cool piece, good rhythm and some jabs.

Geno 01-16-2019 11:05 AM

Uppage. So relevant today

Aero 01-17-2019 12:34 AM

Its like I lost faith in all you so called legends of text
A bunch of clowns, that are known for some shit I could never respect

followed by crash landings from the highest of peaks
id force the ones thinkin they the best, to set asside ther beliefs

This was cool. I like a good vent piece. The shot at me cool some friendly fire but I really do site disses don’t press your luck

Aero 01-17-2019 12:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by StarFaggot (Post 147863)
Its like I lost faith in all you so called legends of text
A bunch of clowns, that are known for some shit I could never respect
hof members have no relevance left, what's next on your list
Sure u champed a lot of shit, but who cares when whats left of us quits


So I type from the field, and fuck the feedback if you'd never relate
I don't claim to be the best, but I can sure recognize when you aint



Cool piece, good rhythm and some jabs.

*sigh*

Aero 01-17-2019 12:36 AM

Ohhhh I thought this was new lol I’m like who signed into that Starfaggot account and left feed lol.

Geno 01-17-2019 02:54 AM

Ya i alrdy know. We good though. Was just skimming old pages and found this so upped it. Glad u peeped. Thanx

Exis 01-17-2019 03:13 AM

Who the fuck ups shit from 6 years back...Sad bitches.

Objective 01-18-2019 06:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by oats (Post 139689)
I liked:

Somebody told me once, fuck a reputation and write what I feel
Don't hide behind a fucking gimmick when there's real life to reveal

That shit stuck out to me too. Defo a dope read, good shit Geno.

Sinacog 01-21-2019 10:25 PM

This is a pretty dope piece, Genocide. Really no complaints, I believe the reason you think text is like this - you need to go on RR more - text is alive there. Here, it's okay though..used to be better I assume? lol..but this was pretty niice..good multi-syllabic rhyming..good structure..good rhyme schemes..I enjoy some of the one-liners..was dope and crisp..niice one man..glad to have you write something like this..niice one..keep it up..man..


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