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[Scripter]

This was definitely different I honestly have not looked much into rhyming schemes until now. I believe you had a interesting subject and you did make it believable.

Snort some coke then report to the p.a.
Ignorin the charges for D.K. while I'm retortin with jokes.
Life's just a game, well it was for one of us
The rest of me suffered with my knife in the cain.

He is a example of the pause that you used in your poem. I also found this interesting.

Here is something you may find usable since you are into different rhyming schemes.
http://nicholastozier.com/words/have...rhyme-schemes/

Overall I thought it was a good read. Keep writing!