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God Of War · 08-28-2013, 04:19 PM

text is mine now, murder everything in the ring before i climb down
the audience, the lobbyists, all you see is bodies when u sign out
ima remind clowns, when respect is done, necks get strung
im wreckless, my breakfast, is a fucking peasants lung
let aero brag about banks, till his bodies found floating next ta one
dont know what you expected son, tired of the laugh shit
this aint for show faggot, n i dont fuck wit that sho faggot
just cuz he fucked 2 dudes, it dont make this hoe savage
my flows lavish, the thrones had it, ima expose whackness
a bunch of pussies pretending to be dicks, we got our own catfish
no theatrics, we culd go bags less,i bet jail'd trip ya out
when the only bars u ever been behind, is the ones in nika's mouth
you know what this about, no insane twists, or lame spits
just a straight diss, that'll get you scalped where ur brain sits
metts is the new mario brothers, stuck in the past where there game is
joes gotta be luigi, since his green ass is envious of eryone whose made it
im tha greatest, cats get flatlined, u dudes is past prime
n tyson aint raping no one, its to fucking late for juice n nap time
never drop a whack rhyme, when i turn the net on its over
i aint trying to win,im trying to rip the fucking head off your shoulders

haahhaha

its bars over bullshit, im trying to rip the heart out you cool kids
acting like a SNITCH, makes it easy to disregard what u fools did
time for school bitch, to rip out ur spine is my mission
i just finished watching bleach, n striks got that shit on ice in his kitchen
fuck the nicest intentions, i want to see all you whores dead
if u are top ten, we are not friends, all i see is a fucking bullseye on ur forhead
u aint seen the mind of war yet, ima correct how these faggots act
you claim loyalty, then turn out more crooked the patricks back
lace this whole track with facts, this is not hype
allen knights just mad, cuz the leafblower came from his jobs site
i let bombs fly, lines clean, u cant follow my scheme
rawn'll stalk n rape a bitch, then run forensics on his own crime scene
dont fuck wit my team, pancake'll get ur throat dawg
this shit went from competition, to handshakes and blowjobs
beef? no mas, these cats is always scared n quittin
champions dont stop, at the top, they maintain n hold there positions
but u dudes is to arrogant to listen,all thats lost is respect
so fuck it, while u clown in discussions, i got the pen takin shots at ur neck

Boredom · 08-28-2013, 04:34 PM

time for school bitch, to rip out ur spine is my mission
i just finished watching bleach, n striks got that shit on ice in his kitchen

wooooooooo

shit was fia @God Of War

God Of War · 08-28-2013, 04:50 PM

ty sir

Wise Wiggles · 08-28-2013, 07:12 PM

Nice to see a drop from you bro.

Don't know if this was srs or on that lamar tip but it had its moments and flow was cool too can't front was expecting some misplaced letters but you seem to have kicked that habit since you been changing the up-the-back-blow-outs.. Maybe a little humbling ? Good jobs !

Mike Wrecka · 08-28-2013, 08:10 PM

this was dope GOW.

ima remind clowns, when respect is done, necks get strung
im wreckless, my breakfast, is a fucking peasants lung

nice

i let bombs fly, lines clean, u cant follow my scheme
rawn'll stalk n rape a bitch, then run forensics on his own crime scene

this was lulz

nice piece , good flow throughout. good multis.

shameless plug time. join the WCL .

Geno · 08-28-2013, 08:43 PM

this was fucking grimey. ill ass diss piece gow. fucking inspirational to say the least. CONTROL text like shit

Neighbor · 08-28-2013, 10:58 PM

Rawn line went hard as fuck lmao

CopyPat · 08-29-2013, 01:14 AM

well done g.o.dub. flow was smooth throughout "flows lavish" -nice word. good punches. some pretty good wordplays. this was solid no doubt, coulda used a tad more vocab/intri***y in scheming if we're getting picky but i have no complaints here, good drop

God Of War · 08-29-2013, 08:34 AM

Precise it eryone ima get to peeping some shit in the on today and leaving feed

YDK · 08-29-2013, 01:18 PM

Damn bruh good ta see ya droppin haymakers still lol too many bars ta quote tbh but the flow was clean. This pretty much exactly wat a real diss verse is supposed ta be. Good shit my dude

Mr. J · 08-29-2013, 02:44 PM

This was nice I enjoyed the flow the multis werr strung along nicelu
Good work all around I would quote but I'm on my phone
a lot of great lines though keep writing

Allen Knight · 08-29-2013, 07:49 PM

This was dope, lmaoo at the rawn line

Brian Bryan · 08-30-2013, 04:17 AM

fuck the nicest intentions, i want to see all you whores dead
if u are top ten, we are not friends, all i see is a fucking bullseye on ur forhead

yup

08-28-2013, 04:19 PM	#1
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,825 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493980	TARGET ACQUIRED text is mine now, murder everything in the ring before i climb down the audience, the lobbyists, all you see is bodies when u sign out ima remind clowns, when respect is done, necks get strung im wreckless, my breakfast, is a fucking peasants lung let aero brag about banks, till his bodies found floating next ta one dont know what you expected son, tired of the laugh shit this aint for show faggot, n i dont fuck wit that sho faggot just cuz he fucked 2 dudes, it dont make this hoe savage my flows lavish, the thrones had it, ima expose whackness a bunch of pussies pretending to be dicks, we got our own catfish no theatrics, we culd go bags less,i bet jail'd trip ya out when the only bars u ever been behind, is the ones in nika's mouth you know what this about, no insane twists, or lame spits just a straight diss, that'll get you scalped where ur brain sits metts is the new mario brothers, stuck in the past where there game is joes gotta be luigi, since his green ass is envious of eryone whose made it im tha greatest, cats get flatlined, u dudes is past prime n tyson aint raping no one, its to fucking late for juice n nap time never drop a whack rhyme, when i turn the net on its over i aint trying to win,im trying to rip the fucking head off your shoulders haahhaha its bars over bullshit, im trying to rip the heart out you cool kids acting like a SNITCH, makes it easy to disregard what u fools did time for school bitch, to rip out ur spine is my mission i just finished watching bleach, n striks got that shit on ice in his kitchen fuck the nicest intentions, i want to see all you whores dead if u are top ten, we are not friends, all i see is a fucking bullseye on ur forhead u aint seen the mind of war yet, ima correct how these faggots act you claim loyalty, then turn out more crooked the patricks back lace this whole track with facts, this is not hype allen knights just mad, cuz the leafblower came from his jobs site i let bombs fly, lines clean, u cant follow my scheme rawn'll stalk n rape a bitch, then run forensics on his own crime scene dont fuck wit my team, pancake'll get ur throat dawg this shit went from competition, to handshakes and blowjobs beef? no mas, these cats is always scared n quittin champions dont stop, at the top, they maintain n hold there positions but u dudes is to arrogant to listen,all thats lost is respect so fuck it, while u clown in discussions, i got the pen takin shots at ur neck

08-28-2013, 07:12 PM	#4
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,507 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788019	Nice to see a drop from you bro. Don't know if this was srs or on that lamar tip but it had its moments and flow was cool too can't front was expecting some misplaced letters but you seem to have kicked that habit since you been changing the up-the-back-blow-outs.. Maybe a little humbling ? Good jobs ! __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

08-28-2013, 08:10 PM	#5
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,526 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779335	this was dope GOW. ima remind clowns, when respect is done, necks get strung im wreckless, my breakfast, is a fucking peasants lung nice i let bombs fly, lines clean, u cant follow my scheme rawn'll stalk n rape a bitch, then run forensics on his own crime scene this was lulz nice piece , good flow throughout. good multis. shameless plug time. join the WCL . __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

08-28-2013, 08:43 PM	#6
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,330 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	this was fucking grimey. ill ass diss piece gow. fucking inspirational to say the least. CONTROL text like shit __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

08-28-2013, 10:58 PM	#7
Neighbor Genghis Khan Vuitton Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,304 Battle Record: 30-10 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Pic Key Grand Prix - 1-2 Season 1 - Newbie Tournament II - Fight Night LXII - Fight Night XLII - Fight Night XXXIII - Fight Night XXVI - BA Swag & Flow - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - Netcees Battle League(2x) - BA Slugfest II - Fight Night of Champions - Fight Night LXXXIII - Summer Classic X Rep Power: 34764468	Rawn line went hard as fuck lmao __________________ Even signing my autograph’s like writing a slaughter pact

08-28-2013, 04:34 PM	#2
Boredom Been On One Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 1,618 Battle Record: 26-28 Champed - Newbie Tournament IV Rep Power: 415107	time for school bitch, to rip out ur spine is my mission i just finished watching bleach, n striks got that shit on ice in his kitchen wooooooooo shit was fia @God Of War

08-28-2013, 04:50 PM	#3
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,825 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493980	ty sir

08-29-2013, 01:14 AM	#8
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742222	well done g.o.dub. flow was smooth throughout "flows lavish" -nice word. good punches. some pretty good wordplays. this was solid no doubt, coulda used a tad more vocab/intri***y in scheming if we're getting picky but i have no complaints here, good drop __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

08-29-2013, 08:34 AM	#9
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,825 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493980	Precise it eryone ima get to peeping some shit in the on today and leaving feed

08-29-2013, 01:18 PM	#10
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181110	Damn bruh good ta see ya droppin haymakers still lol too many bars ta quote tbh but the flow was clean. This pretty much exactly wat a real diss verse is supposed ta be. Good shit my dude __________________

08-29-2013, 02:44 PM	#11
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,033 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349679	This was nice I enjoyed the flow the multis werr strung along nicelu Good work all around I would quote but I'm on my phone a lot of great lines though keep writing __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

08-29-2013, 07:49 PM	#12
Allen Knight The Bad Guys. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,168 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899398	This was dope, lmaoo at the rawn line __________________ C.O.B

08-30-2013, 04:17 AM	#13
Brian Bryan BITER Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: England Posts: 620 Battle Record: 4-0 Champed - Gimmick Battle League Rep Power: 0	fuck the nicest intentions, i want to see all you whores dead if u are top ten, we are not friends, all i see is a fucking bullseye on ur forhead yup