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Old 08-30-2013, 01:10 AM   #21
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actually I don't even read so whatever
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Old 08-30-2013, 01:11 AM   #22
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Pussy biting should be deemed term worthy since were on the topic.
just saying, nobody wants to be told they got pussy bit
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Old 08-30-2013, 01:16 AM   #24
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Old 08-30-2013, 01:17 AM   #25
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The open mic is the worst in terms of criticism on this site. You'll rarely if ever see a truly negative feed. The only form of negative feed is lack of feed.
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if I don't feed I don't like
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Old 08-30-2013, 01:18 AM   #26
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One thing to consider is that no one will take your advice if it's all negative. When I give feedback to someone who isn't very good, I try to use that to explain how they can develop their strengths by addressing their weaknesses. Let people know that they can get better, then give them a template to do it. Otherwise, you're just being mean.
if you're a shitty writer you should be told so

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Old 08-30-2013, 01:18 AM   #27
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Fuck ya'll for not feeding my latest piece then ya non reading non likers
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This and this are what I mean when I say you need to stress what even a not-very-good writer is doing right in order to get them to consider what you're saying they're doing wrong. If you're leaving feedback, the reason is to help the writer improve. Sometimes that means highlighting strengths. Other times that means pointing out weaknesses. Ideally, that means both.
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if the writer doesn't feel motivated to improve then who gives a fuck

this isn't daycare

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So then what's the point of feedback at all?

If I notice a writer consistently not taking my advice, I generally start to stay away from their work entirely. There's no reason to not be constructive in your criticism. Saying "This was dope" and leaving it at that at least makes the writer feel good for a quick second, in theory. Calling a verse wack and leaving it at that does nothing, unless you've got well-established credentials and the respect of the writer.
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Old 08-30-2013, 01:31 AM   #31
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I beat you or one of your friends in Ruzzle.
He said he was at petco when you did.

and he said good
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he says you'll die if you face me, though.


assuming he didnt kill you 24 timesz
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Old 08-30-2013, 01:32 AM   #32
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I dare somebody ta say my last drop was wack, I'll fuckin falcon punch em in the taint
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Old 08-30-2013, 01:35 AM   #33
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Respect n even admiration is diff then dick riding imo

dick riding piggy backing n coat tails r all pretty much synonymous
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Old 08-30-2013, 01:37 AM   #34
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Old 08-30-2013, 01:42 AM   #35
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assuming he didnt kill you 24 timesz
I like excuses, too. I'll pull the Jordan and play until I win then never play again.

I enjoy your group's secret consortium of uber-intelligent familiarity. I got too close to the flame. I'll just take my Ruzzle dominance and feed the great open mics as they come.
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Old 08-30-2013, 01:46 AM   #36
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I like excuses, too. I'll pull the Jordan and play until I win then never play again.
Isn't that the Jerome Bettis?
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Nah it was a reference to Michael Jordan's penchant for gambling. He'd lose in various games against various people. He'd just keep challenging for rematches through sheer force of personality until he won once, then he'd stop and say he's better.

It really doesn't apply to Ruzzlegate at all because I'm a pleb, but I liked the reference when I wrote it.
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Old 08-30-2013, 01:51 AM   #39
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The fuck is all this 'Ruzzle' business I've been noticing lately?

like a words w friends of some sort ?
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Boggle with Friends, basically.
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