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08-28-2013, 09:49 PM
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SOBER
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 12,480
Battle Record: 2-5
Champed - AOWL Season 2
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Scouting Report:
Odd formatting of verse. Enjoys using adjective+noun double word multies Standard rhyme scheme; end of line, sparing use of internal rhymes. Rarely goes on long rhyme runs. Dark/Macabre subject matter; "suicidal" Enjoys brash imagery. Longer length of lines. Serrated Tyrant (I'm so fucking Deep)
My veins suffocate a navy color, they run down my wrist with a babbling sound The azure blue reminds me of some deep ocean where I could haphazardly drown I'm my own king and with my body I can do acts so senselessly cruel Like erudite tongue laps around the razor marks; I'm in a sensational mood This razor shines crimson white against the candles and lamp dimly lit Next to this Puerto Rican whore, asleep and disappointed after I finished limp I came on her face while masturbating with Spinach dip, the nasty explosion Made me feel so alive that I had to killed my sperm too, that useless passive expulsion There's no rush like extermination mixed with auto-erotic asphyxiation/ Because then I can't waste your time with text based on my phonic limitations/ My depression precedes another night of impotence and sex boots/ I love my imagery, but fuck these crestfallen dolphins spouting purple rain from their blowholes of death juice/ Diamond bejeweled coma, I want to played Bejeweled with your devilish devil I am the positive electron, ready to receive the serrated blade's negative metal while I drift off pumping the volume to 11 on my sedative's level
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