So where does old man like me find competitive writing?

[Vulgar]

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah

@Vulgar Reading and re-reading your critiques of not only my verses but others, I feel as though you have this well-earned air of superiority. That cute, no one knows what the fuck you're talking feed is belying you now. You miss the point and heart of a lot of verses when I review feed.

My reading comprehension has been sort of off lately so I try to have fun with it. I get fatigued easily now, it's quite frustrating. However, if I have an opinion about something I'm going to be confident about what I think about it. But yeah, I don't think I try to exert any superiority - it's just the Vulgarian way of communication. What in particular do I need to work on?

[PancakeBrah]

Originally Posted by Vulgar

My reading comprehension has been sort of off lately so I try to have fun with it. I get fatigued easily now, it's quite frustrating. However, if I have an opinion about something I'm going to be confident about what I think about it. But yeah, I don't think I try to exert any superiority - it's just the Vulgarian way of communication. What in particular do I need to work on?

This mostly stems from you completely whiffing on the obvious sarcasm of my Grizzly Bears pieces. I'm very petty. But when I read your feed, not just of that particular piece, then read some perfectly constructed verse of yours with great rhymes it jives greatly in my personal estimation of your true level of analysis. And analysis applies more to pieces than feed. There never seems to be a piece you feed that you truly like. Even if a feed is positive, it's in this weird language that makes the reader of feed more interested in it than the piece. You insist upon yourself in feed. The ever present 'keep doing you' is almost condescending.