Decibel Vs Young Jack Thriller - DECIBEL WINS KO

Elwats · 08-24-2013, 09:27 PM

he's a weak act, always takin pics of peeps who inspires fear but ya still don't pose a threat
and dude gets beaten by nothing...so you can count on him to lose to Jack
vs......
misunderstood scripts, generic, and the fact that its played
as your `line up: on the board then benched` like he truly is Jack of all trades

Average battle.... The quoted bars^, were the only ones that sorta hit....JTR, prison/ bars/stretch are played to hell fam, so is FB not/liking shit etc... your wordings off and some of ya lines are about 4-5 words too long.... DEC, your wording is off point too and your bars ain't got any set up... don't just filler the first line of a bar to fit with the punch in second in the second, instead try using a set up which'll improve the punch ten fold.

Honestly, I would call this as a draw... but seeing as JTR dropped extra bars I feel that this has to go to Dec due to J's unfair advantage...

Vote Dec....

08-24-2013, 09:27 PM	#1
Elwats w/ against me? Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 114 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 0	he's a weak act, always takin pics of peeps who inspires fear but ya still don't pose a threat and dude gets beaten by nothing...so you can count on him to lose to Jack vs...... misunderstood scripts, generic, and the fact that its played as your `line up: on the board then benched` like he truly is Jack of all trades Average battle.... The quoted bars^, were the only ones that sorta hit....JTR, prison/ bars/stretch are played to hell fam, so is FB not/liking shit etc... your wordings off and some of ya lines are about 4-5 words too long.... DEC, your wording is off point too and your bars ain't got any set up... don't just filler the first line of a bar to fit with the punch in second in the second, instead try using a set up which'll improve the punch ten fold. Honestly, I would call this as a draw... but seeing as JTR dropped extra bars I feel that this has to go to Dec due to J's unfair advantage... Vote Dec.... __________________ Everyone knows I be on a higher level of existence. You stupid fuckers are just too big-headed to admit your inferiority.