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Old 08-23-2013, 08:20 PM   #2
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The fact I looked at the lyrics before the track started is indicative of something.

You read written lyrics like Aesop Rock. If you didn't read this in delivery, you deliver like Aesop Rock. Strong lyricism, but a running on until a firefly moment of perfect delivery arrives to match them, but I'm too busy trying to catch it and inhale it that I miss the next moment, subsequently missing the next couple of lines of run on. You're already on to the next busy point to make. Your writing reads so meaningful and articulate and weighted in text, but you fail to capture that in audio. Give yourself the time you deserve.
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